Reviews: The Competition

5/29/2024 c1

6WellHelloThereEdward
Crikey that wa hot. Great build up and what a beautiful ending. I want what she had!

12/14/2023 c1 twilightslut
NEED. IT. and as a shifter , i dont know if i want this in my script or not.

6/8/2022 c1 StormyMood
Wooooooow, this was a very sexy and hot read. Damn, I need more! I definitely wouldn’t mind if you wrote more and we all got to read what other kinky shenanigans that all got into.

5/21/2022 c1 claryfray112233
need more chapters this is to good not to turn in to a smutty story

5/9/2022 c1

21Ptool
loved it!

3/7/2022 c1 Bevey99
Holy shite. HOT HOT HOT. She could handle more, it can happen. But we need more of these 3. Thanks for writing and sharing. Really

3/6/2022 c1 TwiFanfictionRecs
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2/25/2022 c1 CrinsomDragon
Fun and delicious!

2/21/2022 c1 jen5795
That was HOT! I could definitely keep reading more.

2/19/2022 c1

1christinahorse
This was hot...really hot. You should do a 2nd chapter where they do more than just their mouths!

2/18/2022 c1 dpennell007
Oh yeah, there is no going back here. Onward and upward!

2/17/2022 c1

22beegurl13
Good gravy! Wow, that was fun. :D Not the worst place in the world to be, that's for sure. Nice job! I wouldn't mind more of these three. :)

2/16/2022 c1 Flippysten
Loved it! Would really like it if you continued this : )

2/16/2022 c1 Nicoconsd
Wow being the middle of an Edward Jasper sandwich sounds pretty fantastic. :)

2/16/2022 c1 EeWee
WOW! Hot, hot, hot

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