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7/13/2023 c3 2Stacey's Universe
I loved this story! Will there be more? Sam and jack actually having a baby together would be really sweet

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5/1/2022 c3 Schatze8210
Great story! Thanks for sharing.
4/4/2022 c3 Guest
I like you're detailed writing much better than most. One small correction on your last note. Everybody says bdu it's Basic Training Uniform BTU. A small thing also is the base phones may have wire taps so I'm not sure if calling Daniel to hint over the phone about their relationship would have been wise. But I digress very good over all. Putting in one of your own experiences made the emotions real. And you stuck to the characters, which not everybody does. Thank you for sharing.
3/31/2022 c1 11SJshipper75
Thank you for your kind comments. I try to answer my comments to each of you, but I can’t reply on my phone. Lol As for the guests, I do have somewhat of a sequel that was written before I wrote this one. It obviously doesn’t mention this story. It’s called, He had a Dream. As for the latest comment. It’s finished, Season Nine happened and Sam went back to SG1. Their decision was made for them.
3/31/2022 c3 Guest
So what happened afterwards you need to complete your story before your prematurely ending it
2/23/2022 c3 11NTACvic
Moving story. I'm sorry it was based on your personal experience. Thanks for sharing.
I love your idea of promoting Davis. And indeed, everything's possible between Sam's leaving Atlantis and when we see her in S5 finale (I imagined the same in some of my fics).
2/23/2022 c3 Guest
Lovely story. A sequel would be great!
2/22/2022 c3 dpdp
Sad know how they feel. Excellent. Hope you continue with Atlantis.
2/22/2022 c3 7KyKy's mummy
Good chapter, thank you.
2/22/2022 c3 56Coljayjay
I have to apologize. At the first chapter I wasn’t sure about this story and then I read and this chapter oh my god… I cried.
I can see that you’ve been through this because it feels so right what they say, I mean the feeling, the questions and their behaviors. Very good idea to use jack for healing her. I love that moment when Sam makes him talk about the naquadha he has.
I really wanted to read more and more. I love them like this
I wish too they have found times together.
Is there new chapter or it’s over?
Thanks for this story.
2/21/2022 c3 feb04
Lovely story , the ending in my opinion was just right ! Thank you .
2/21/2022 c3 Guest
Good ending but maybe a lead in to another story? Jack's magic hands might be able to keep another baby safe?
2/21/2022 c2 7KyKy's mummy
Once again a perfectly written chapter and once again thank you and I look forward to the next chapter, now back to writing myself, your story a lovely distraction.
2/20/2022 c2 feb04
So sad ! Then a small " glow " of hope , looking forward to more ! Great storytelling !
2/20/2022 c2 Hulamomona
Looking forward to more. great beginning.
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