for Rio 1 128/10 c2 
7I AM BIG J
I read this story with my buddy. He asked me, "What did you think of this story, then?"
I replied, "It's Sh*t." That's what it is.
Give me a message and I'll give you a more thorough review.
7I AM BIG JI read this story with my buddy. He asked me, "What did you think of this story, then?"
I replied, "It's Sh*t." That's what it is.
Give me a message and I'll give you a more thorough review.
2/20/2022 c2 26RiodanJaneiro97
Okay, so you have written nicely and it was a good chapter. But I think the chapters are a bit too short. If that makes sense? I think you need to expand them a bit.
Other than that great job!
26RiodanJaneiro97Okay, so you have written nicely and it was a good chapter. But I think the chapters are a bit too short. If that makes sense? I think you need to expand them a bit.
Other than that great job!