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8/10 c2 7I AM BIG J
I read this story with my buddy. He asked me, "What did you think of this story, then?"

I replied, "It's Sh*t." That's what it is.

Give me a message and I'll give you a more thorough review.
2/20/2022 c2 26RiodanJaneiro97
Okay, so you have written nicely and it was a good chapter. But I think the chapters are a bit too short. If that makes sense? I think you need to expand them a bit.

Other than that great job!
2/20/2022 c1 7Tq3942
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