for Crying for the Moon9h c140 DaftMerc39
Review Responses: Yep Belphegor videos babysitting is cute and I picture what would happened if Belphegor babysitting Naruto from a different universe when if he was little being birth son of Lucifer and Lilith or adoptive son of Charlie and Vaggie. There are old fanart Leviathan's designs before ep Mastermind and even redesigns after Mastermind too.
Part 3 Marquis War is great and fight scenes.
Lucifer's grandfather clock shows where himself and his family were, let me guess Harry Potter 2 family clock. Wait what Grandfather? The Big G's father? Older than the Big G?
Tamamo said Karen is her mother in front of Kurama.
I wonder which Sin Loona is talking about who that is suitable punishment for Hinata?
Millie wins Melani lose FATALITY!
Soul Contracts can't be destroyed by anything except one thing that can.
Review Responses: Yep Belphegor videos babysitting is cute and I picture what would happened if Belphegor babysitting Naruto from a different universe when if he was little being birth son of Lucifer and Lilith or adoptive son of Charlie and Vaggie. There are old fanart Leviathan's designs before ep Mastermind and even redesigns after Mastermind too.
Part 3 Marquis War is great and fight scenes.
Lucifer's grandfather clock shows where himself and his family were, let me guess Harry Potter 2 family clock. Wait what Grandfather? The Big G's father? Older than the Big G?
Tamamo said Karen is her mother in front of Kurama.
I wonder which Sin Loona is talking about who that is suitable punishment for Hinata?
Millie wins Melani lose FATALITY!
Soul Contracts can't be destroyed by anything except one thing that can.
10h c140 
4animecollecter
It's a gut feeling that's it's soon.i didn't say it will be next chapter or two. I say 10 to 20 chapters from now.
4animecollecterIt's a gut feeling that's it's soon.i didn't say it will be next chapter or two. I say 10 to 20 chapters from now.
13h c140 Heavy
See's Karen, "Oh No!, MEDIC!"
See's Karen, "Oh No!, MEDIC!"
13h c140 Nicholas
Hopefully Tamamo will be alright, Kurama is going down.
Hopefully Tamamo will be alright, Kurama is going down.
13h c140 Ice
I see Crimson shagged off, not that i'm surprised.
I see Crimson shagged off, not that i'm surprised.
15h c140 3MichaelTheFox
Ooooh! The other biju have arrived... But whose reinforcements are they? And I know the odds don't look good for her, but I hope Karen will live. I'm looking forward to see the next chapter.
3MichaelTheFoxOoooh! The other biju have arrived... But whose reinforcements are they? And I know the odds don't look good for her, but I hope Karen will live. I'm looking forward to see the next chapter.
18h c140 MEATBICYCLE
If you plan to have Naruto going through a super true demon form transformation, I have a suggestion for the design.
Type; "DStrike Dead by Daylight Dracula true form skin" on youtube to see my idea on Naruto's form. Just edit this new form to make him appear more Werewolf looking rather than vampire looking and we have a winner.
If you plan to have Naruto going through a super true demon form transformation, I have a suggestion for the design.
Type; "DStrike Dead by Daylight Dracula true form skin" on youtube to see my idea on Naruto's form. Just edit this new form to make him appear more Werewolf looking rather than vampire looking and we have a winner.
23h c140 Guest
This was freaking AWESOME!
This was freaking AWESOME!
17h c140 StrongGuy159
Awesome chapter part 3 continue please. Also are Kurama's Siblings going to help her or stop her and what Weapon is Lucifer talking about?
Awesome chapter part 3 continue please. Also are Kurama's Siblings going to help her or stop her and what Weapon is Lucifer talking about?
19h c140 21Yami Luna Kitsune
pretty great chapter
oh, so you DID intend to put yogirt. I didn't get farther than the pilot
wow, someone managed to actually hurt kurama a bit
looks like tamamo came to her senses and chose her loyalty. good for her, since she chose correctly
kurama, YOU turned her against you. you were a HORRIBLE mother, while Karen ACTUALLY CARED for tamamo, like a mother should
wow, that was an unexpected injury for hinata
'cracked'? hinata is broken, if not completely shattered
which sin, bee or asmodeus?
'gonna kill over from' should be 'gonna keel over from'
Melanie, you went after her boy. despite a SLIGHT bit of rivalry a moment ago, Millie wants you DEAD dead
that's ONE threat to the family dead
ok, i'm honestly a bit lost here. 'nothing happened'? was the document destroyed, and there was no repercussion? if so, you might wanna put it like "set fire to the document, burning it and turning it to ash" or something along that line
'sync out magic, should be 'sync our magic'
huh, interesting fighting style for kurama
[I grin] looks like the sword of lucifer's best friend is reaching out to him, calling to him
how will kurama's "siblings" react when they find out that she took her daughter's soul and likely killed off the ones that acted like her actual parents? best guess, they do what they can to slaughter her
VERY eager for the next chapter
21Yami Luna Kitsunepretty great chapter
oh, so you DID intend to put yogirt. I didn't get farther than the pilot
wow, someone managed to actually hurt kurama a bit
looks like tamamo came to her senses and chose her loyalty. good for her, since she chose correctly
kurama, YOU turned her against you. you were a HORRIBLE mother, while Karen ACTUALLY CARED for tamamo, like a mother should
wow, that was an unexpected injury for hinata
'cracked'? hinata is broken, if not completely shattered
which sin, bee or asmodeus?
'gonna kill over from' should be 'gonna keel over from'
Melanie, you went after her boy. despite a SLIGHT bit of rivalry a moment ago, Millie wants you DEAD dead
that's ONE threat to the family dead
ok, i'm honestly a bit lost here. 'nothing happened'? was the document destroyed, and there was no repercussion? if so, you might wanna put it like "set fire to the document, burning it and turning it to ash" or something along that line
'sync out magic, should be 'sync our magic'
huh, interesting fighting style for kurama
[I grin] looks like the sword of lucifer's best friend is reaching out to him, calling to him
how will kurama's "siblings" react when they find out that she took her daughter's soul and likely killed off the ones that acted like her actual parents? best guess, they do what they can to slaughter her
VERY eager for the next chapter
3/15 c140 5Gamelover41592
Awesome work on this chapter and lots of epic fights, though I didn't think you could make Hinata more insane
5Gamelover41592Awesome work on this chapter and lots of epic fights, though I didn't think you could make Hinata more insane
3/15 c140 Fenris Silverblood
I really hope the Bijuu side with Naruto and stop Kurama. Also, where the hell are the Sins? I would have thought they would have shown up by now. Lastly, Mar is finally coming into play. Can't wait.
I really hope the Bijuu side with Naruto and stop Kurama. Also, where the hell are the Sins? I would have thought they would have shown up by now. Lastly, Mar is finally coming into play. Can't wait.