for Pokémon: Sora and Kairi's Journey6/8 c508 Crimson Hawk Wolf
I was wondering who was going to get one or more Sneasel and i really like the route you took for this chapter.
Ever sense Ben showed up i had a feeling of something was going to happen but it did not dawn on me as to what that something was till this chapter. A Star Wars theme is what was nagging at me and more so when darklight attacked in chapter 504. Not at all a bad route you took and i wonder how things are going to end up turning out in the long run.
If I didn’t watch all the Star Wars movies the past few days I don’t think i would have caught onto it. Dam i got to much on my mind to over look that for so long like this.
Thanks for the update here and for helping me figure out what i over looked. I am looking forward to reading what you have in mind as things move on. I wonder how it will all turn out for those involved and how everyone takes the news of Darklight when they find out the truth. Dam thats going to be brutal for everyone when it comes.
I was wondering who was going to get one or more Sneasel and i really like the route you took for this chapter.
Ever sense Ben showed up i had a feeling of something was going to happen but it did not dawn on me as to what that something was till this chapter. A Star Wars theme is what was nagging at me and more so when darklight attacked in chapter 504. Not at all a bad route you took and i wonder how things are going to end up turning out in the long run.
If I didn’t watch all the Star Wars movies the past few days I don’t think i would have caught onto it. Dam i got to much on my mind to over look that for so long like this.
Thanks for the update here and for helping me figure out what i over looked. I am looking forward to reading what you have in mind as things move on. I wonder how it will all turn out for those involved and how everyone takes the news of Darklight when they find out the truth. Dam thats going to be brutal for everyone when it comes.
276/6 c507 Crimson Hawk Wolf
Dam i feel sorry for Sora, Kairi and the others having to deal with these annoying pests not taking the hint tyere not interested. I am surprised you didn’t habe toxicroak pop back out when that Kyle moron showed up. Kairi really needs a pokemon of her own that will take care of annoying guys like them.
Nice how everything turned out in the chapter and to bad Kyle got off easy in the long run. Maybe a thunderbolt could of been added but he might if liked that given he was asking to be pushed back in the hole again.
I wonder how things will turn out for everyone involved in the next chapter and what will come next for them. I am looking forward to reading how all that ends up going for them.
Dam i feel sorry for Sora, Kairi and the others having to deal with these annoying pests not taking the hint tyere not interested. I am surprised you didn’t habe toxicroak pop back out when that Kyle moron showed up. Kairi really needs a pokemon of her own that will take care of annoying guys like them.
Nice how everything turned out in the chapter and to bad Kyle got off easy in the long run. Maybe a thunderbolt could of been added but he might if liked that given he was asking to be pushed back in the hole again.
I wonder how things will turn out for everyone involved in the next chapter and what will come next for them. I am looking forward to reading how all that ends up going for them.
6/5 c507 MegaCharles20
Wow, triple event episode. Kairi being chased by two boys, but luckily it kept the Sokai reputation. Also, Uncle Chet is dead, no one is gonna miss him. And also surprising to see more new characters.
Wow, triple event episode. Kairi being chased by two boys, but luckily it kept the Sokai reputation. Also, Uncle Chet is dead, no one is gonna miss him. And also surprising to see more new characters.
6/1 c506 Crimson Hawk Wolf
Nice how things ended up going here in the chapter. I am not all that sure on how to feel about Michael not catching that Gengar though. I wonder why that was and what the plans for it later on might be. How very odd.
I have been wondering if Karen and the others will join the others in Sinnoh or not. I wonder what plans you might have in stored for them though given how that part ended. I also keep wondering if any of them end up with keyblades or not as well. Its been on my mind from time to time as to what the over all plans for them are if not keyblade holders like the others are.
Thank you for the chapter update to this story and i am looking forward to reading what comes next when the chance comes. It will be interesting to see how it all goes for those involved and what might come there way as time moves on.
Nice how things ended up going here in the chapter. I am not all that sure on how to feel about Michael not catching that Gengar though. I wonder why that was and what the plans for it later on might be. How very odd.
I have been wondering if Karen and the others will join the others in Sinnoh or not. I wonder what plans you might have in stored for them though given how that part ended. I also keep wondering if any of them end up with keyblades or not as well. Its been on my mind from time to time as to what the over all plans for them are if not keyblade holders like the others are.
Thank you for the chapter update to this story and i am looking forward to reading what comes next when the chance comes. It will be interesting to see how it all goes for those involved and what might come there way as time moves on.
6/1 c506 MegaCharles20
Somehow that Gengar reminded me of one from Pokémon Mystery Dungeon, a troublemaker Gengar who is leader of Team Meanies. I'm glad he was defeated.
Somehow that Gengar reminded me of one from Pokémon Mystery Dungeon, a troublemaker Gengar who is leader of Team Meanies. I'm glad he was defeated.
5/26 c505 Crimson Hawk Wolf
Nice how everything has turned out in the last two chapters. I wonder how everything will end up turning out for those involved in the next chapters to come. I look forward to reading more as time goes on.
Also i hope to catch up on past stories i need to work on as well soonish.
Nice how everything has turned out in the last two chapters. I wonder how everything will end up turning out for those involved in the next chapters to come. I look forward to reading more as time goes on.
Also i hope to catch up on past stories i need to work on as well soonish.
5/26 c505 MegaCharles20
For a moment it seemed like Sora chasing his dreams being unable to wake up but thank goodness he is alright.
For a moment it seemed like Sora chasing his dreams being unable to wake up but thank goodness he is alright.
5/26 c505 masters123lfm
Interesting Chapter. If Nights was there he would be very helpful in this situation. Glad it’s not Wiseman or Reala to torment him.
Interesting Chapter. If Nights was there he would be very helpful in this situation. Glad it’s not Wiseman or Reala to torment him.
5/25 c504 MegaCharles20
Oh my... It was like seeing Star Wars Ep 3 all over again, when Obi-Wan faces Anakin.
Oh my... It was like seeing Star Wars Ep 3 all over again, when Obi-Wan faces Anakin.
5/23 c503 Guest
When you get to writing Arceus and the Jewel of Life, all I have is one thing to request.
Please, in the name of Arceus, please have Arceus say Judgement and not justice.
When you get to writing Arceus and the Jewel of Life, all I have is one thing to request.
Please, in the name of Arceus, please have Arceus say Judgement and not justice.