for A Good Brother11/15/2022 c3 codywhite162
This was an excellent chapter and I cannot wait to read what happens next!
This was an excellent chapter and I cannot wait to read what happens next!
11/14/2022 c3 Sandman001
You actually have to show Naruto paying for breaking off agreements like with the Phenex. Why would another Devil house go into deals with him if he'd arbitrarily (in the eyes of most devils and the other party) back out. You need to write Naruto being put in bad situations, he's basically been coasting so far in this story and has only bulldozed anyone that's been considered an antagonist.
You actually have to show Naruto paying for breaking off agreements like with the Phenex. Why would another Devil house go into deals with him if he'd arbitrarily (in the eyes of most devils and the other party) back out. You need to write Naruto being put in bad situations, he's basically been coasting so far in this story and has only bulldozed anyone that's been considered an antagonist.
11/14/2022 c3 Crimson Riot 01
Wow, se que trataste de hacer lucir bien a todos los personajes pero para mi cada vez que aparezco Grayfia se me olvida el resto, Graygia y Yasaka son los personajes que mas amo de dxd
Wow, se que trataste de hacer lucir bien a todos los personajes pero para mi cada vez que aparezco Grayfia se me olvida el resto, Graygia y Yasaka son los personajes que mas amo de dxd
11/14/2022 c2 Uncharted22
Wait. Mindbreaking? That wasn't there before. So you gonna turn Naruto into a rapist? wth
Wait. Mindbreaking? That wasn't there before. So you gonna turn Naruto into a rapist? wth
11/14/2022 c3 naruto
great chapter keep it up
great chapter keep it up
11/14/2022 c3 Paradoxity
You've written a lot of bangers but this one takes the cake as my favorite. Just great writing.
You've written a lot of bangers but this one takes the cake as my favorite. Just great writing.
11/14/2022 c3 Elchabon
Very good chapters.
Cool and interesting.
I hope Naruto also reclaims the sweet and innocent Asia, and she receives the love she deserves.
Very good chapters.
Cool and interesting.
I hope Naruto also reclaims the sweet and innocent Asia, and she receives the love she deserves.
111/14/2022 c3 4Alucard
Can’t wait for more. It’s painful with how slow this story is updates but I gladly wait for more
Can’t wait for more. It’s painful with how slow this story is updates but I gladly wait for more
11/14/2022 c3 Fredward1
Ayeeee this shits good. Love the punishment. Had to reread the story again but that ain’t no problem lol. Good shit
Ayeeee this shits good. Love the punishment. Had to reread the story again but that ain’t no problem lol. Good shit