for A Good Brother8/27/2022 c2 SPark681
Hmm, damn seems Sona playing with Naruto means Kaza will have some real fun lol anyway keep up the great work!
Hmm, damn seems Sona playing with Naruto means Kaza will have some real fun lol anyway keep up the great work!
8/26/2022 c2 Queztlecoatl
Oh god I hope Rias doesn't fuck Issue... Also, you called Motoka "Motorola" when Naruto was introducing his peerage lol. I think it autocorrected into the phone brand name. You should fix that.
Oh god I hope Rias doesn't fuck Issue... Also, you called Motoka "Motorola" when Naruto was introducing his peerage lol. I think it autocorrected into the phone brand name. You should fix that.
8/26/2022 c2 red hairs uzumaki
привет.
можете сделать его смесью разных существ, новым существом(драконов, богов, и другое. получил их сущность, благословение и другое). всеми плюсами обладал разных рас.
забрал драйга себе.
изменил имя на узумаки(водоворот разных существ и сил).
сможет использовать инь-янь энергию и другие плюсы узумаки.
привет.
можете сделать его смесью разных существ, новым существом(драконов, богов, и другое. получил их сущность, благословение и другое). всеми плюсами обладал разных рас.
забрал драйга себе.
изменил имя на узумаки(водоворот разных существ и сил).
сможет использовать инь-янь энергию и другие плюсы узумаки.
8/26/2022 c1 Marsuvees Black The Dark Lord
This Naruto is a perfect example of how complex people can be.
He and his family are completely revolting and rotten and yet despite that he still has people he cares for.
This Naruto is a perfect example of how complex people can be.
He and his family are completely revolting and rotten and yet despite that he still has people he cares for.
8/26/2022 c2 welltall44
Honestly considering the kind of story this is I really hope Asia ends up ditching Issei for Naruto now that she is witnessing him without the blinders that her first impressions left her with. There is something to be said for a person who is upfront and doesn't pretend to be somebody they aren't. Plus I kind of just want to see Naruto get all the major girls, and neither Issei or Saji seem to be anything but minor characters. Plus I really like your not losing sight of Naruto being the protag and feel you are pretty good about how you are able to effectively shift between Naruto and other character perspectives. Keep up the awesome work and I greatly look forward to the next chapter.
Honestly considering the kind of story this is I really hope Asia ends up ditching Issei for Naruto now that she is witnessing him without the blinders that her first impressions left her with. There is something to be said for a person who is upfront and doesn't pretend to be somebody they aren't. Plus I kind of just want to see Naruto get all the major girls, and neither Issei or Saji seem to be anything but minor characters. Plus I really like your not losing sight of Naruto being the protag and feel you are pretty good about how you are able to effectively shift between Naruto and other character perspectives. Keep up the awesome work and I greatly look forward to the next chapter.
18/26/2022 c2 UnsanMusho
I hope Naruto doesn't just go the 'Issei route' and crashes the rating game or the after engagement party since that would put him in a bad light. I would rather he outsmarts Riser in a way that only humiliates him while only slightly hurting his family's reputation that they would give Ravel to Naruto hehehe.
I hope Naruto doesn't just go the 'Issei route' and crashes the rating game or the after engagement party since that would put him in a bad light. I would rather he outsmarts Riser in a way that only humiliates him while only slightly hurting his family's reputation that they would give Ravel to Naruto hehehe.
8/26/2022 c2 Guest
Is Naruto banging his sisters or is it just his mother right now?
Is Naruto banging his sisters or is it just his mother right now?
8/25/2022 c2 Unnatural Reader
A great update, love seeing how things changed get stayed similar. Tia’s believing Naruto doesn’t want her feels on par with her character and seeing Sona’s other side was fun to read.
Keep up the good work
A great update, love seeing how things changed get stayed similar. Tia’s believing Naruto doesn’t want her feels on par with her character and seeing Sona’s other side was fun to read.
Keep up the good work