for Deku-Sensei2/26/2022 c9 NTD Prime
The story itself is very enjoyable to read. But for the love of everything good in the world please please please cut back on your italics by 90 percent. I'm not just trying to bring you down here, italicizing text only works because of its scarcity. I promise you, your intent will shine through your writing despite not having italicized text every other word.
The themes of your story are shaping up to be very heartwarming and I'm excited to see it continue.
The story itself is very enjoyable to read. But for the love of everything good in the world please please please cut back on your italics by 90 percent. I'm not just trying to bring you down here, italicizing text only works because of its scarcity. I promise you, your intent will shine through your writing despite not having italicized text every other word.
The themes of your story are shaping up to be very heartwarming and I'm excited to see it continue.
22/25/2022 c2 BlazingCharizard01
story Seems interesting, but I can't stand the text not being left alinded
story Seems interesting, but I can't stand the text not being left alinded