for Percy Jackson: And the Sword of Artemis7/26/2023 c2 Lueckens
Update please
Update please
2/23/2023 c1 
2Shigeraki
Bad start already. Never start with child birth. Especially never start in the mother’s POV.
2ShigerakiBad start already. Never start with child birth. Especially never start in the mother’s POV.
2/11/2023 c2 Guest
Sweet home Alabama
Sweet home Alabama
2/10/2023 c2 Guest
Hey does Archer have my memories from the god of highschool tournament and my memories of me being sun wukong
Hey does Archer have my memories from the god of highschool tournament and my memories of me being sun wukong
12/26/2022 c2 MediocrePocketRat
Its utterly implausible for any Modern magus to hold more Mana than a Demigod of the Greek Pantheon naturally.
Also, did you have a stroke or something at the latter half of this chapter? It devolved into ramblings and smushed characters Especially after you wrote chapter one and the first half perfectly fine.
Its utterly implausible for any Modern magus to hold more Mana than a Demigod of the Greek Pantheon naturally.
Also, did you have a stroke or something at the latter half of this chapter? It devolved into ramblings and smushed characters Especially after you wrote chapter one and the first half perfectly fine.
6/24/2022 c2 GilgameshZasshu
Love the start, it is a really solid and well done base. I can see this competing in the big leagues one thing I recommend after you finish the period of childhood relations (should end like chapter 4 or 5) move onto the the main story line as that will keep readers invested in your work.
Best of luck,
Gil
Love the start, it is a really solid and well done base. I can see this competing in the big leagues one thing I recommend after you finish the period of childhood relations (should end like chapter 4 or 5) move onto the the main story line as that will keep readers invested in your work.
Best of luck,
Gil