for Percy Jackson: And the Sword of Artemis3/12/2022 c1 Gamermisogi
Ooh, this story has potential. A lot of it. Adding twins to the mix adds the uncertainty of favouritism. I bet he was summoned there for a reason by alaya
Ooh, this story has potential. A lot of it. Adding twins to the mix adds the uncertainty of favouritism. I bet he was summoned there for a reason by alaya
3/12/2022 c1 jarc503okami
Como una observación, el nombre de Shirou en este Fic ser "Shiro" o "Shirou" los dos suenan similares pero la "U" hace una gran diferencia en el nombre del personaje "Shiro es blanco" mientra que "Shirou es el cuarto hijo" así que solo diré que pon un poco de atención en cual de los dos utizar y no una amalgama en la que abeces le nombres Shiro y en otras Shirou.
Como una observación, el nombre de Shirou en este Fic ser "Shiro" o "Shirou" los dos suenan similares pero la "U" hace una gran diferencia en el nombre del personaje "Shiro es blanco" mientra que "Shirou es el cuarto hijo" así que solo diré que pon un poco de atención en cual de los dos utizar y no una amalgama en la que abeces le nombres Shiro y en otras Shirou.
3/12/2022 c1 negi83
I used to think Shirou's name means white too. The name Shirou means "samurai, warrior, gentleman" (士) (shi) and "son" (郎) (rou).
I used to think Shirou's name means white too. The name Shirou means "samurai, warrior, gentleman" (士) (shi) and "son" (郎) (rou).
3/12/2022 c1 Mew01
I love this story more please
I wonder which character is going to be romantically pairing with Shirou.
I love this story more please
I wonder which character is going to be romantically pairing with Shirou.
3/12/2022 c1 
1Black Fire Born
I love it, I hope more chapters arrive soon, thanks for the new story !
1Black Fire BornI love it, I hope more chapters arrive soon, thanks for the new story !
3/12/2022 c1 5RyuuundyingSoul
Already loving how this story started. And I must say, I am greatly intrigued of the upcoming bullshitery. Hopefully enough headaches to give to his parents as well.
5RyuuundyingSoulAlready loving how this story started. And I must say, I am greatly intrigued of the upcoming bullshitery. Hopefully enough headaches to give to his parents as well.