for The Creation of Oizys
17/30/2022 c3 Neotono
Not a great story. The worst psrt was how Harry spoke, no 14-15 year old talks like that. You made him dound to much like a fictional wise sorcerer who has been around for decades at the very least.
Not a great story. The worst psrt was how Harry spoke, no 14-15 year old talks like that. You made him dound to much like a fictional wise sorcerer who has been around for decades at the very least.
7/23/2022 c1 r99smith
Hello, I tried to find the story an the links you put in the notes. Unfortunately, the pages have not been “found”. I have been rereading many of your stories as you are one of my favorite fan fiction authors. If you have a moment, would you send the the updated url, if one exists? As always, thank your for writing and sharing your talent with the readers.
Hello, I tried to find the story an the links you put in the notes. Unfortunately, the pages have not been “found”. I have been rereading many of your stories as you are one of my favorite fan fiction authors. If you have a moment, would you send the the updated url, if one exists? As always, thank your for writing and sharing your talent with the readers.
4/17/2022 c3 Hadrian von Eveschatten
Your refusal to kill the hellspawn suggests you're on his side to whatever extent you're willing to acknowledge.
Your refusal to kill the hellspawn suggests you're on his side to whatever extent you're willing to acknowledge.
3/26/2022 c3 Guest
This story does not suit you at all.
This story does not suit you at all.
3/20/2022 c3 Logain
A bit disturbing but great nonetheless.
A bit disturbing but great nonetheless.
3/20/2022 c3 mantelofdeath
Considering your warnings, was expecting more but was tame for me.
For other maybe be horrible.
Liked it.
Considering your warnings, was expecting more but was tame for me.
For other maybe be horrible.
Liked it.
3/20/2022 c3 NazgulBelserion
I mean it was interesting but I feel like Lily should one day remember. By then Harry is a full on Dark Lord that has slowly taken over the Muggle world from the Shadows.
I mean it was interesting but I feel like Lily should one day remember. By then Harry is a full on Dark Lord that has slowly taken over the Muggle world from the Shadows.