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5/9/2023 c18 stevenpiskunov2
Dont listen to any negative reviews. In the end its your story and you can do what you want with it. If people dont like it then they can stop reading. In my opinion I really enjoy this story like I am sure many others do so keep up the good work.

I also never liked Ais very much. She got close to Bell just to see how he got strong so quick, while she did eventually end up being his friend for who he was it still doesnt change that fact about strength. If he never got stronger or at least got stronger as fast as he is getting then she would have probably forgotten about him eventually after the minotaur incident.
5/7/2023 c18 Pixie Duck
Trash chapter of pure torture porn.

Commissioner is a fucking moron and clearly is an edgy 10 years old without a pea sized brain that clearly has a hate boner for Loki to ask for this trash
4/29/2023 c18 Ladis11
Holy shit ! I love it. No need to say more, just know i love it.
4/28/2023 c1 Commissioner
Hello, i am the commissioner of this story and decided to say a few things, so lets not keep you waiting

Hellsing: Suck a fat one, still cant get the Darktide no hit run that your laggy ass got

Zera: Because i dont like Ais, simple as, but dont worry, Ais will get development in future chapters.

Dusker: Loki familia arent the good guy's, no matter how much Omori wants them to be. They exilled the 2 Familia's that were on their knees after they protected them and the city for a thousand years. They exiled a Terminally Ill pregnant woman and led to her death. They let evilus fester in the shadows because of their inability to take over the role of Zeus and Hera. Loki has only herself to blame for the death of her children during the Dark Times.

Reborn: Finn will try to explain his actions. The real question is if he will live long enough to finish explaining them.

And for the people that ask for other girls to be added to the pairing. Its only Ryuu and Riveria. No one else (well maybe Alfia, who knows) especially not Ais
4/21/2023 c18 AkariS93
Holy shit that was intense and totally deserved. can't wait for the next chapter.
4/20/2023 c18 Kamui Raiu
Holy shit
4/19/2023 c18 Flaberjaber
Read this all in one sitting, and I was pleasantly surprised at how good this was.
4/4/2023 c18 Narusakusasuhina
Amazing story can't wait to see how the last chapter effects people interactions with your main characters.
3/31/2023 c18 Nerv987
Great story so far, can’t wait for the next chapter.
3/19/2023 c6 fonte20nit
this description that the bell gives of fairies and mini elves are of souls?
3/18/2023 c18 DrHellsing
your a nerd jas...jk love you dont hurt me
3/18/2023 c18 2Masquer Q
I really needed a story like this - where Alfia lives with Bell and Bell somehow finds a cure for her. That said, I expected her sickness to be much worse by the time Bell gets ti Orario. Mother power OP!
Regarding the recent chapter, man, that was brutal. I like how Alfia’s anger is all about her sister. And her familia ( betrayal) too, but mostly her sister. And I also forgot the church canon Bell stayed at with Hestia was where Meteria was at… that Alfia beats up one of the instigators there is quite - poetic? Ironic? Maybe both. I feel bad for Aiz though. One of my favorite characters in canon. Got cannon-balled through the streets RIP. I don’t think she will have much role in this plot-line but I hope she gets a good ending as a side character.
3/15/2023 c18 Cloackn
Hallo hallo!
This chapter was wonderfully dark!
It was so much fun to read until the end where it got well
Bell is finding that you can have more than one goal in life and thing to do while working towards your goals yet this development can hurt Bell so much
This is so exciting because it is not just Bell's reaction to said events but
Alfia, Hephastios, Ryuu, Alise, Freya, Riveria,Airmid, and Syr

I am looking forward to the next chapter
3/15/2023 c18 1JintoLin
I think Alfia understands what might of happened with Freya or at least that something happened. Do like that through all of this he biggest worry was what he friends will think and if they would disown him because of the actions of him and his teacher. While i was a serious chapter i laughed every time one of the girls said "Papa" as i get the reason for it and feel for Riveria. Let just hope best girl Alise can help Bell out as well as help Ryu to understand.
3/14/2023 c18 Zera
There’s quite a bit I wanna say regarding the current so-called hatred like what Dusker said, but I guess not. The commissioner probably wanted it to go this direction. And, uh, if you don’t mind, may I ask why Aiz literally has next to no presence or impact in this story, like in anyway? Even in this chapter she got one-shotted by Alfia then the whole thing was glossed over just simply because Bell got that covered.
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