for High School DxD: Knights of the Round Table6/30/2022 c2 
1TheHeavens
You really should separate the dialogue more. It kinda hurts the eyes as it is now.
1TheHeavensYou really should separate the dialogue more. It kinda hurts the eyes as it is now.
6/20/2022 c1 yangn33
The dialogue could use some work, as well as the descriptions. But other than that, it shows promise.
The dialogue could use some work, as well as the descriptions. But other than that, it shows promise.
3/24/2022 c1 Guest
Look forward for the next chapter! There’s a scarcity of king Arthur fanfics!
Look forward for the next chapter! There’s a scarcity of king Arthur fanfics!
3/22/2022 c1 DungeonMaster
I am very curious to know what will happen next.
Lefay (DxD) is unlucky because if Manaka Sajyou appears, Manaka will not like the idea that the girl is the Master of her prince (Arthur / ProtoSaber)
Will Fou appear in the story?
I am very curious to know what will happen next.
Lefay (DxD) is unlucky because if Manaka Sajyou appears, Manaka will not like the idea that the girl is the Master of her prince (Arthur / ProtoSaber)
Will Fou appear in the story?
3/24/2022 c1 12Akakiru
Why do I want a embarrassing grandpa Arthur:" Look at my adorable Descendants. So cute!"
12AkakiruWhy do I want a embarrassing grandpa Arthur:" Look at my adorable Descendants. So cute!"
3/22/2022 c1 keybladelight
Oh now I'm curious prototype Arthur got to be summon by her DxD ancestor le fay pendragon which I wonder how DxD Arthur P will react and how the other factions will react to the greatest king to have ever live.
Hope kuroka try to seduce the knight of the sky silver.
Wonder how draig will react to is previous well not previous owners since proto Arthur is different from Artoria Pendragon.
Oh now I'm curious prototype Arthur got to be summon by her DxD ancestor le fay pendragon which I wonder how DxD Arthur P will react and how the other factions will react to the greatest king to have ever live.
Hope kuroka try to seduce the knight of the sky silver.
Wonder how draig will react to is previous well not previous owners since proto Arthur is different from Artoria Pendragon.
3/22/2022 c1 Phantom Thief of Hearts
Ok, I like the idea so far (Proto Saber and Lefay as his Master).
So I'll give you a perfect score on originality for now.
I can tell you made certain changes (the Merlin that Proto Saber knows is female, not male) but it doesn't bother me too much.
NOTE: Proto Merlin is canon, she was officially released in FGO Arcade
Ok, I like the idea so far (Proto Saber and Lefay as his Master).
So I'll give you a perfect score on originality for now.
I can tell you made certain changes (the Merlin that Proto Saber knows is female, not male) but it doesn't bother me too much.
NOTE: Proto Merlin is canon, she was officially released in FGO Arcade