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14Power of Magic
Okay, I wasn't expecting that Dragonfly hero from that Superhero Movie to be on this team, or for Logan to have had a kid, whos got the same powers as him (are you gonna reveal who the mother is at all or leave us guessing?) Having Spyke as part of the team was an interesting idea and I wonder if Kate and Ava will try and get their pictures taken with Harry at some point (maybe even get his autograph). It'll be interesting if Fury did bug Peter, Gwen and Felicia's houses too and I wonder what kind of ritual Harry's planning on using

Okay, I wasn't expecting that Dragonfly hero from that Superhero Movie to be on this team, or for Logan to have had a kid, whos got the same powers as him (are you gonna reveal who the mother is at all or leave us guessing?) Having Spyke as part of the team was an interesting idea and I wonder if Kate and Ava will try and get their pictures taken with Harry at some point (maybe even get his autograph). It'll be interesting if Fury did bug Peter, Gwen and Felicia's houses too and I wonder what kind of ritual Harry's planning on using
3/2 c56 CalebThorne13
putting Dragonfly from superhero movie into this was a stroke of genius, keep going!
putting Dragonfly from superhero movie into this was a stroke of genius, keep going!
3/2 c56 AnimeFan13579
Wow you really went and added the super hero parody movie with a spoofed Spiderman character. Can only imagine how this all would supposedly break out. Funny enough there is a character named Dragonfly in Marvel but that individual is a villainess.
Wow you really went and added the super hero parody movie with a spoofed Spiderman character. Can only imagine how this all would supposedly break out. Funny enough there is a character named Dragonfly in Marvel but that individual is a villainess.
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1Nai Darkor
I loved the Ultimate Spider-Man TV series. It was my first non cultural base knowledge contact with Spider-Man. Ava was literally my second favourite character in the series.

I loved the Ultimate Spider-Man TV series. It was my first non cultural base knowledge contact with Spider-Man. Ava was literally my second favourite character in the series.
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1Dragon-bait-2001
really, Superhero Film... lol. nice touch.
just dont take too much from current MCU... stick to pre-Endgame.

really, Superhero Film... lol. nice touch.
just dont take too much from current MCU... stick to pre-Endgame.
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Well the POV change was not obvious at all and distrupted the flow of the chapter, not to mention I couldn't care less about some rando on a Teen Avengers team.
To be honest Hqrry didn't even put up a fight and was convinced to go instantly. Depending how this goes it could easily ruin the story since from the start I've said this Harry would not have joined a government run team, something you reiterated yoursekf with your needless rehash of canon events.
Well the POV change was not obvious at all and distrupted the flow of the chapter, not to mention I couldn't care less about some rando on a Teen Avengers team.
To be honest Hqrry didn't even put up a fight and was convinced to go instantly. Depending how this goes it could easily ruin the story since from the start I've said this Harry would not have joined a government run team, something you reiterated yoursekf with your needless rehash of canon events.