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12/4/2023 c1 Rairi Valelira
Adopt a story and disappear?
10/5/2022 c1 AJGuardian
Sigh. Just a oneshot? I'd tell you to stop making new fics just because of the challenges, but you didn't bother to think of the readers who would expect updates.
I know how it is. Doesn't make it better though.
6/29/2022 c1 WhateverPlus
I liked this chapter
5/10/2022 c1 Guest
Can Ichigo just get three girls and you put Rukia in Narutos harem leaving Ichigo with the other three in his mini harem

Can you also add
Tier Harribel
Emilou Apacci
Cyan Sung Sun
Aura
Unohana

Hope there’s a chance to due to his power the Gotei 13 offer Naruto the position of Captain
4/28/2022 c1 8Gundam Meister Uzumaki
How about making Karasuba the spirit of Kenpachi Zaraki's zanpakuto? They are really similar so I don't think it's much of a stretch.
4/28/2022 c1 Ryu wolf
Interesting story, nice job
4/22/2022 c1 55pain17ification
Glad to see your version up. Looking forward to seeing where you take it.

Thanks, and best of luck :)
4/8/2022 c1 10thunderofdeath97
not really fond of the fact that naruto has a bigger and better harem than ichigo
4/1/2022 c1 raio10
Great start on this story and very intrigued to see how Naruto will be in the Bleach world love the start and cannot wait to see more and where it goes next, cannot wait to see Naruto’s true strength and interactions with a lot of the Bleach characters, keep up the good work.
3/27/2022 c1 Guest
Hm maybe if Naruto has some other power to boot Karasuba can represent that power

Anyway I hope Naruto is ungodly strong already like he could beat the likes of Aizen and Yhwach right now and his potential and rate of growth is higher than his brothers

Love the pairing and can I make a request have Ichigo’s mini harem be three girls and pair Rukia with Naruto

Could you also pair Harribel and her other two underlings with Naruto and the Sternritter girls with him to
3/26/2022 c1 Zero
Just have to ask will naruto have any quincy power and Hollow power as well because it is always soul reaper power every time.
3/27/2022 c1 Anikong
Great first chapter and I found it appropriate that Kazehana was Naruto's spirit instead of Karasuba. Also really liked the harem choices, though I didn't get why Mila Rose was in Naruto's harem instead of Hallibel. Looking forward to the next chapter.
3/27/2022 c1 Tsuki katsureta
nice history and thank you for cortinue working this, a suggestion can you change lisa for harribel i think she needs some love and a better ending.
3/27/2022 c1 Tony Anderson
Okay, this one is interesting as well. A good intro chapter. Hope to see another update in general from you soon!
3/27/2022 c1 1zx20000006
Love the prologue I look forward to the next chapter though word of advice make naruto’s harem shorter maybe the same size as ichigo’s. Big harems fall apart easily; what I mean by this is that big harems tend to become boring really fast beacuse there are too many girls so each girl barely gets (for a lack of a better word) screen time with or without the mic this reduces the girls in the harem to a collection of tropes instead of actual personality and they start to fade in the background it’s better if you stick with a small harem and work of their character development and romantic development as the story goes on instead of useing a character for a scene or two then forgetting about her. Also more importantly don’t make the romance easy it gets really boring when all the girls just agree to share the mc or they they just don’t care that they are in a harem it’s better if they are not okay with it and start to compete with each other over naruto it’s more fun that way the comedy romance and drama will keep the story interesting when the action gets boring or dies down.
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