for They Don’t Deserve You (My Friend)3/27/2022 c1 James Birdsong
Very good
Very good
3/27/2022 c1 
1Mikael the War Cougar
Is there any chance this could be expanded into a full story? I understand if you can't, but I think the idea of a full-blown story with this AU idea would be awesome.
1Mikael the War CougarIs there any chance this could be expanded into a full story? I understand if you can't, but I think the idea of a full-blown story with this AU idea would be awesome.
3/27/2022 c1 RiceMasterJojo
This is very interesting, I can’t wait to see what ideas you have in store for us.
This is very interesting, I can’t wait to see what ideas you have in store for us.
3/27/2022 c1 36ix-and-stones
it's honestly an amazing premise and pretty well executed. My only recommendations are to add tone to the dialogue (excitedly, quietly, etc.) and to fix the few minor spelling mistakes. Otherwise, it's great!
36ix-and-stonesit's honestly an amazing premise and pretty well executed. My only recommendations are to add tone to the dialogue (excitedly, quietly, etc.) and to fix the few minor spelling mistakes. Otherwise, it's great!