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8/24 c1 4Omnifictionwriter
Thanks for the great story i really liked it and its beautiful and the moment when ben cried on gwens sholder and how ben becomes a complete celestialsapein is great and its beautiful i hope you will continue it
5/5 c4 2yraj2004
damn if he had full control, he could have tried to find some way to turn back his immortality curse...
like go back in time, with his S. and B. to talk to the S. and B. of the past, and convince them with his oh-so-great convincing skills.
3/28 c4 Fuck Names
This was an insane read. The solution to solve dozillions of debates to use Alien X was utterly ridiculous and unbelievable but so Ben 10. I'm glad he got together with Eunice, can't believe he wasted 100 years not being with her cuz she's his cousin biologically. Who cares? That stuff is pretty common in Asia and loads of other parts of the world. I'm glad you brought her back. Anyways, lovely story, thanks for writing.
3/28 c3 Fuck Names
Nah I hate Vilgax as much as the next guy but that's one cruel as hell punishment lmao. Fitting though. I love how much more wiser Ben is. As for the romance part, well, Kai always felt a very forced ending girl tbh. I'm glad Sir George didn't die and got a good ending.
3/28 c2 Fuck Names
How did he transform into Chromastone without touching the watch? I may have forgotten but even with master control, doesn't he need to touch the watch?
3/28 c1 Fuck Names
This is really cool
3/12 c4 Indra Cedar
This story has amazing concepts applied to it!
Glad to give it the opportunity honestly, the way you manage to tell the audience the important information and not to dive to much into it is truly admirable!
I really love how was this journey
11/19/2023 c4 shriramasokan
So, I had an idea for how a Ben 10 crossover/fusion with Invincible could work over on the Invincible fanfic thread, so I thought I'd also port it here to see what kind of feedback it gets.

Now, the big issue for a fusion would be the Plumbers, as, given their knowledge of the galaxy and its inhabitants, they'd know about Viltrumites in a fused setting and that's Nolan's cover blown then and there. So, he'd have to be outed as an infiltrator well before the plot of Invincible happens, or he'd have to defect from his mission MUCH earlier than he did in the series/comics.

This idea kinda goes with both of those, with it being set during the events of the Original Series, and more specifically during the episode "Back with a Vengeance".

Much like the episode, Vilgax and Kevin attack, only for Omni-Man to swoop in and fight them off (complete with telling Vilgax "Earth isn't yours to conquer" when he gets them isolated). Ben ends up overhearing this while hidden from view and heads back to Max and Gwen to warn them about it. Max makes it clear he already knew and has been coordinating with the Plumbers and the GDA to find the best way to subdue Nolan without causing immense casualty, with him whipping out the Null Void projector and managing to imprison Vilgax and Kevin without Ben and Gwen getting sucked in this time. He did try to get Nolan sucked in too, but he ended up getting out of the way in time.

Nolan thanks Max for the help, with there being this sort of tense standoff between the two, as if waiting for the other to just come out and say what's really going on. The Tennysons turn to leave, but then Nolan makes a subtle remark about Ben and warning him to be careful what he hears. It becomes clear that Nolan knows that Ben knows, which results in Ben fighting back on impulse because, well, he's an impulsive ten-year-old who's family was just threatened.

Most of Ben's aliens get bodied in the fight, but he ends up unlocking the Viltrumite transformation in the battle, which evens things out...for a few minutes. After that, Nolan adjusts accordingly and easily defeats him like he did Mark. Before Nolan can finish Ben off, however, Max had Cecil call the Graysons and brought them there, leading to Debbie and Mark seeing what Nolan's doing and learning the truth.

Seeing the absolute terror in his family's eyes actually causes him to have an epiphany much earlier, and it leads to him turning himself in. Max activates the Null Void projector one last time, with Nolan willingly entering the void and going to prison there. Maybe spending some more time fighting Vilgax while he's at it.
11/14/2023 c4 Pov-Edward
likeeeeeeeeeee
8/7/2023 c4 1NovaDeer
This is hands down the best Ben 10 fanfic I have ever read. For years I have been shifting through Bwen shit looking for something intriguing to read and I have finally found it, 9.5/10 bootiful
7/23/2023 c4 advent10ii7
Thank you so much for this story, it really left an impact on me few stories have, leaving a mixed feeling in my gut. It's not a bad feeling, it just shows that the story was able to reach my core. Not going to lie, when the Naljian referred to Ben as "Infinity", I got chills. Also blew my mind, although I was a bit expecting it as I read along, didn't take away the impact though, when they got to the final motion.

Honestly, you perfectly fleshed out ideas I had for Ben and Alien X for a while. Like "Couldn't Ben just learn debating and master Alien X?" or "What if Ben became one with Alien X, maybe his human form becoming a disguise?"

This was a perfect what-if story, it had a good balance of give and take that I feel is essential to these stories, like in the original Marvel ones for example, Spider-Man joins the Fantastic Four but Reed loses Sue to Namor. Here, Ben becomes a great and powerful hero and avoided many of Prime's mistakes, but he has lost a huge part of his humanity.

And finally, with that 5YL Atomix reference, I'm assuming you checked out the story at least (unless you've only seen it in passing, if so, then go read it because I'm going to refer to a few plot points), and it feels like you dead-on hit the mark the themes of power, morality, and humanity I've come to associate with Ben 10. This is honestly one of the most respectful Ben 10 fics out there I've seen (for some reason I really liked that reference to Prime when Bellicus quoted "the keys to Alien X", really made the fic feel connected to the show. Although I'm a bit confused, did this Ben not deal with Servantis? Then again, I guess that's how cosmic retcons work.) Anyways, I feel like you perfectly encapsulated why 5YL Ben is afraid of misusing Alien X. Such as the decisions you showcased, such as the crossover ones. So, Ben was technically responsible for the deaths that happened in Jurassic Park/World, and for the travesty of the Star Wars sequel trilogy, the first as a test, and the second just because he was exasperated. That thought is unsettling, that one person, separated by infinity, completely altered the lives of countless people, some on a completely personal level.

So yeah, again, thank you for writing this stellar story, it totally blew me away!
7/23/2023 c2 advent10ii7
I'm really invested in your story! It's paced and written well, and you are so cool for using the 5YL Atomix design!
7/21/2023 c4 6dippytrippy122
This was absolutely brilliant. What a happy and depressing AU that really went over the intricacies of infinite power. Loved it!
6/13/2023 c4 Guest
Great story loved it!
Amazing
5/29/2023 c4 9Mark123100
I really like the four parts of the 'what if' story you wrote. Interesting and fun at the beginning, then melancholic when detailing the far future, then poignant and sweet and thought provoking at the end.

I liked the Marvel 'what if' series for exploring alternate realities with existential questions, and I like what you've written so far. Reminds me of the ending of Hellsing Ultimate Abridged, where Alucard spent thirty years as a therapist, talking to 3,424,867 souls, including his own.

I look forward to what this series may bring in the future.
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