for Infinity5/12/2023 c4 Lucifer-Satani
Wow. I have to admit, for the first ever Ben 10 fanfic I've ever read, this was a truly amazing choice.
It was done in such a way that I had no trouble following, I was enjoying it the entire time. I wonderful job well done.
Wow. I have to admit, for the first ever Ben 10 fanfic I've ever read, this was a truly amazing choice.
It was done in such a way that I had no trouble following, I was enjoying it the entire time. I wonderful job well done.
5/5/2023 c2 E.E.L6489
Ben you cheeky bastard I love this au hope ya don't mind if I borrow a bit of this au lore for my short crude one
Ben you cheeky bastard I love this au hope ya don't mind if I borrow a bit of this au lore for my short crude one
10/17/2022 c4 
3FROGKICKS
I don't have too much to say, but this is a brilliant idea for a fan fiction with solid execution all around. I haven't watched the full series in years, only seeing a couple dozen episodes recently, and I found the presentation of the storyline alternations excellent. I'll be curious to see the continuation of the Alien X scenario, as well as new ones! Wonderful job.
3FROGKICKSI don't have too much to say, but this is a brilliant idea for a fan fiction with solid execution all around. I haven't watched the full series in years, only seeing a couple dozen episodes recently, and I found the presentation of the storyline alternations excellent. I'll be curious to see the continuation of the Alien X scenario, as well as new ones! Wonderful job.
10/2/2022 c4 2Amit Barabi
Great story. It has many elements that I used when I started my story 2 years ago. I will not get into details in this review, but I love the direction thatvyou took. I hoped Eunice could appear more, but I guess it would go against your vision. She is a main character in my story, though, and Ben is immortal there as well.
2Amit BarabiGreat story. It has many elements that I used when I started my story 2 years ago. I will not get into details in this review, but I love the direction thatvyou took. I hoped Eunice could appear more, but I guess it would go against your vision. She is a main character in my story, though, and Ben is immortal there as well.
10/2/2022 c2 Amit Barabi
I love this chapter, but I have to wonder about Ben even having Atomix since he never scanned the DNA for NRG. I was always under the impression that he got both forms from that one scan in Ultimate Alien. Also, I think that Azmuth should be smarter than making an improved Evolution feature just because Ben teased him.
Other than these two issues, I love the chapter. It is not too different than what I planned for Ben's arc in my dead YouTube series, but different enough for me to appreciate. Pleace keep writing.
I love this chapter, but I have to wonder about Ben even having Atomix since he never scanned the DNA for NRG. I was always under the impression that he got both forms from that one scan in Ultimate Alien. Also, I think that Azmuth should be smarter than making an improved Evolution feature just because Ben teased him.
Other than these two issues, I love the chapter. It is not too different than what I planned for Ben's arc in my dead YouTube series, but different enough for me to appreciate. Pleace keep writing.
9/8/2022 c3 Mother of Quirks
(for chapter 2 cause I can't comment there anymore) HAHAHA he just manipulated Azmuth!
(for chapter 2 cause I can't comment there anymore) HAHAHA he just manipulated Azmuth!
8/29/2022 c4 8dndkeg
I completely forgot to leave a review here. Overall I really liked this scenario, and Ben ends up with Eunice in this timeline, which I think is sweet considering Ben's circumstances.
Honestly, I would like to see a few scenarios. One is the following: "What if Ben and Julie stayed together?" My reasoning sounds a bit childish, but the one flaw I hated with OV (besides making Ben act immature and not giving him the Evolutionary Function) was forcing Ben and Kai together. The pairing is still under my eternal wrath to this day XD. You could start this right after the UA episode "Duped" ended, and Ben apologizes to Julie. This action could begin the chain of events.
Another one could be named the following: "What if Grandpa Max was given the Omnitrix as intended?" Now that would be a different challenge on its own because it will have to deal with starting from the OS's beginning.
My last scenario proposal is actually something I PM you about when you were asking for opinions in writing this story amongst "The Man Out of Time." I responded by possibly exploring/creating backstories of the other evil versions of Ben shown in OV, leading to my final 'scenario': "What if we explored the timeline of Bad Ben?" Out of all the evil versions of Ben given, Bad Ben was never really given a backstory other than his personality and his quirks. I think that this version of Ben would be similar to the Shattered Glass dimension from the "Transformers Animated" series. This scenario could potentially explore a good version of the bad guys and vice-versa.
I hope this gives you some ideas, and keep up the excellent work! I'll see you in the next one!
Stay safe and stay cool!
8dndkegI completely forgot to leave a review here. Overall I really liked this scenario, and Ben ends up with Eunice in this timeline, which I think is sweet considering Ben's circumstances.
Honestly, I would like to see a few scenarios. One is the following: "What if Ben and Julie stayed together?" My reasoning sounds a bit childish, but the one flaw I hated with OV (besides making Ben act immature and not giving him the Evolutionary Function) was forcing Ben and Kai together. The pairing is still under my eternal wrath to this day XD. You could start this right after the UA episode "Duped" ended, and Ben apologizes to Julie. This action could begin the chain of events.
Another one could be named the following: "What if Grandpa Max was given the Omnitrix as intended?" Now that would be a different challenge on its own because it will have to deal with starting from the OS's beginning.
My last scenario proposal is actually something I PM you about when you were asking for opinions in writing this story amongst "The Man Out of Time." I responded by possibly exploring/creating backstories of the other evil versions of Ben shown in OV, leading to my final 'scenario': "What if we explored the timeline of Bad Ben?" Out of all the evil versions of Ben given, Bad Ben was never really given a backstory other than his personality and his quirks. I think that this version of Ben would be similar to the Shattered Glass dimension from the "Transformers Animated" series. This scenario could potentially explore a good version of the bad guys and vice-versa.
I hope this gives you some ideas, and keep up the excellent work! I'll see you in the next one!
Stay safe and stay cool!
7/6/2022 c4 magueyeseck5
What if Ben unlocked his spark?
It would take place between the Omnitrix removal and the beginning of Alien Force.
What if Ben unlocked his spark?
It would take place between the Omnitrix removal and the beginning of Alien Force.