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19magical fan18
I like this, it's very good and makes you think of all the possibilities.
I love that you made this, I may check out the 5YL comic, don't know why I've never heard of it; DP & Ben 10 were both my most favorite cartoon growing up.
19magical fan18I like this, it's very good and makes you think of all the possibilities.
I love that you made this, I may check out the 5YL comic, don't know why I've never heard of it; DP & Ben 10 were both my most favorite cartoon growing up.
3/31/2022 c1 Giggukarda Guy
My guess for the Dagon herald would probably be from a list mind is:
-Darkstar
-Charmcaster
-Hex
Since I imagine they'd try the absorption thing to get his power like Vilgax
Oh and did Ben update that punishment on Vilgax so he couldn't contact outside or send others for him to rectify that oversight
My guess for the Dagon herald would probably be from a list mind is:
-Darkstar
-Charmcaster
-Hex
Since I imagine they'd try the absorption thing to get his power like Vilgax
Oh and did Ben update that punishment on Vilgax so he couldn't contact outside or send others for him to rectify that oversight
3/31/2022 c2 Ushindi
I love it! This timeline is very interesting, Ben actually controlling Alien X and being the voice of reason for Bellicus and Serena is intriguing and amazing. I'm sad Ben and Julie broke up because how much time Ben has been using to control Alien X, hopefully in the future they can be together again. Vilgax permanently stuck on his home planet was fitting and amazing ending, because of that he won't be able to get the Omnitrix or became herald to Diagon. I'm impressed with Ben's mastering of his negotiations and communication skills have really grown and his Master Control is awesome as well. Because of that he, Kevin and Gwen have a easy time defeating their enemies who used to give them trouble. Ben saving the aliens Aggregor captured before they can get absorbed leading to Aggregor trying to find the Infinity Map and absorbed the Celestialsapien baby never happened and I'm happy for that.
Awesome story you made and I'm looking forward to next chapter.
I love it! This timeline is very interesting, Ben actually controlling Alien X and being the voice of reason for Bellicus and Serena is intriguing and amazing. I'm sad Ben and Julie broke up because how much time Ben has been using to control Alien X, hopefully in the future they can be together again. Vilgax permanently stuck on his home planet was fitting and amazing ending, because of that he won't be able to get the Omnitrix or became herald to Diagon. I'm impressed with Ben's mastering of his negotiations and communication skills have really grown and his Master Control is awesome as well. Because of that he, Kevin and Gwen have a easy time defeating their enemies who used to give them trouble. Ben saving the aliens Aggregor captured before they can get absorbed leading to Aggregor trying to find the Infinity Map and absorbed the Celestialsapien baby never happened and I'm happy for that.
Awesome story you made and I'm looking forward to next chapter.
3/31/2022 c2 1johannvanguard
I like that Ben defeated Vilgax much quicker in the Conqueror's Challenge and he used Alien X's power to keep Vilgax trapped on his home planet. The intervention that Gwen, Max, and Azmuth had with Ben about Alien X was great, especially since it helped Ben slowly repair his relationship with Julie. It's cool that Ben's progress with Alien X helped him, Gwen, and Kevin defeat their enemies quickly. When Albedo and Vilgax teamed up, it was interesting that Vilgax appeared on Earth via a Techadon robot that he controls. I'm glad Ben and his friends made quick work of Albedo, but Mecha Vilgax was difficult to fight with his robots getting stronger. Luckily, Ben, as Atomix, Gwen, Kevin, and Max defeated Mecha Vilgax and destroyed the Techadon Factory for good. Ben convincing Azmuth to put an evolution function in his Omnitrix was funny and thanks to those debate books he read. It's good that Ben and his friends quickly stopped Aggregor before he could get Ra'ad. For the next chapter, I wonder how Ben and his friends will deal with Dagon and his new herald.
1johannvanguardI like that Ben defeated Vilgax much quicker in the Conqueror's Challenge and he used Alien X's power to keep Vilgax trapped on his home planet. The intervention that Gwen, Max, and Azmuth had with Ben about Alien X was great, especially since it helped Ben slowly repair his relationship with Julie. It's cool that Ben's progress with Alien X helped him, Gwen, and Kevin defeat their enemies quickly. When Albedo and Vilgax teamed up, it was interesting that Vilgax appeared on Earth via a Techadon robot that he controls. I'm glad Ben and his friends made quick work of Albedo, but Mecha Vilgax was difficult to fight with his robots getting stronger. Luckily, Ben, as Atomix, Gwen, Kevin, and Max defeated Mecha Vilgax and destroyed the Techadon Factory for good. Ben convincing Azmuth to put an evolution function in his Omnitrix was funny and thanks to those debate books he read. It's good that Ben and his friends quickly stopped Aggregor before he could get Ra'ad. For the next chapter, I wonder how Ben and his friends will deal with Dagon and his new herald.
3/31/2022 c2 8dndkeg
I'm honestly drawing blanks on who would be Dagon's lackey, now as for the story so far, I honestly like it a lot, can't wait to see how this will go considering Ben still is using the original Omnitrix with Master Control.
8dndkegI'm honestly drawing blanks on who would be Dagon's lackey, now as for the story so far, I honestly like it a lot, can't wait to see how this will go considering Ben still is using the original Omnitrix with Master Control.
3/31/2022 c2 3OmniIBIBUltraInstinctGodzilla
Ouch! Ben's mastery over Alien X comes at a personal cost: his relationship with Julie Yamamoto.
I do like that Alien X created the Jurassic World in another Universe. Nice nod.
Vilgax was effectively neutralized with Ben permanently grounding to Vilgaxia using Alien X.
And Aggregor was defeated earlier before he could even get the Map of Infinity and reach the Forge of Creation.
A very intriguing timeline.
3OmniIBIBUltraInstinctGodzillaOuch! Ben's mastery over Alien X comes at a personal cost: his relationship with Julie Yamamoto.
I do like that Alien X created the Jurassic World in another Universe. Nice nod.
Vilgax was effectively neutralized with Ben permanently grounding to Vilgaxia using Alien X.
And Aggregor was defeated earlier before he could even get the Map of Infinity and reach the Forge of Creation.
A very intriguing timeline.
3/31/2022 c1 OmniIBIBUltraInstinctGodzilla
To think it only took a few wise words from Gwen to have Ben decide to give Alien X another chance, leading him to be the Voice of Reason Bellicus and Serena needed.
Ben's increased negotiation and persuasion skills, on top of managing a greater degree of control over Alien X also convinced Azmuth to let Ben keep the Omnitrix's Master Control feature for good.
What an interesting timeline.
To think it only took a few wise words from Gwen to have Ben decide to give Alien X another chance, leading him to be the Voice of Reason Bellicus and Serena needed.
Ben's increased negotiation and persuasion skills, on top of managing a greater degree of control over Alien X also convinced Azmuth to let Ben keep the Omnitrix's Master Control feature for good.
What an interesting timeline.
3/31/2022 c2 1Fan1one
This chapter shows that Ben can be book smart than street smart after the battle between Ben and Vilgax was fun.
1Fan1oneThis chapter shows that Ben can be book smart than street smart after the battle between Ben and Vilgax was fun.
3/31/2022 c1 Fan1one
The narrator intro before the chapter is good. This first chapter clearly shows how some simple words can change the outcome of a situation specially how Gwen suggestion allowed Ben to have access to Alien X powers.
The narrator intro before the chapter is good. This first chapter clearly shows how some simple words can change the outcome of a situation specially how Gwen suggestion allowed Ben to have access to Alien X powers.
3/30/2022 c1 1johannvanguard
It's interesting that Gwen's suggestion led to Ben deciding to talk to Serena and Bellicus again. Thanks to some debate books he read, Ben was actually able to get Serena and Bellicus to agree with using Alien X's power when needed. Though Ben would have to help with their discussions as the voice of reason every now and then. It's funny that one of them led to the creation of Jurassic World. Alien X was helpful with stopping the Highbreed Invasion, even if it just meant altering the Highbreeds' DNA like in the main universe. It was surprising that Azmuth let Ben keep the Master Control for his good progress so far with Alien X. Too bad Ben's time with reading debate books, being Alien X to help Serena and Bellicus, and doing his hero work led to him spending less time with Julie and quitting the soccer team. For the next chapter, I wonder how Ben will use Master Control in the Conqueror's Challenge.
1johannvanguardIt's interesting that Gwen's suggestion led to Ben deciding to talk to Serena and Bellicus again. Thanks to some debate books he read, Ben was actually able to get Serena and Bellicus to agree with using Alien X's power when needed. Though Ben would have to help with their discussions as the voice of reason every now and then. It's funny that one of them led to the creation of Jurassic World. Alien X was helpful with stopping the Highbreed Invasion, even if it just meant altering the Highbreeds' DNA like in the main universe. It was surprising that Azmuth let Ben keep the Master Control for his good progress so far with Alien X. Too bad Ben's time with reading debate books, being Alien X to help Serena and Bellicus, and doing his hero work led to him spending less time with Julie and quitting the soccer team. For the next chapter, I wonder how Ben will use Master Control in the Conqueror's Challenge.
3/30/2022 c2 2PokeKing Charizard
Interesting so far. I’m curious to see how much more things will diverge.
2PokeKing CharizardInteresting so far. I’m curious to see how much more things will diverge.