for Grimm Nightmares2/10 c36 Guest
Ah. Of course. Of course. Not to change from canon huh
Ah. Of course. Of course. Not to change from canon huh
2/10 c35 Guest
Probably way too late for my input but personally, while i would love to see him go to Beacon he seem rather overqualified. And if he did go to Beacon, i hope he gets with none of the main cast, romantically. Like, all of them are just bad imo
Probably way too late for my input but personally, while i would love to see him go to Beacon he seem rather overqualified. And if he did go to Beacon, i hope he gets with none of the main cast, romantically. Like, all of them are just bad imo
2/10 c29 Guest
There are 2 things I hate about canon RWBY Mistral.
1) The fact that its Oriental (which is a stupid mishmash of Chinese and Japanese because the west are stupid), mixed with FUCKING GREEK. LIKE WHY THE FUCK GREEK.
2) the country wasn't fully or at least, well explored in the canon. The rampant banditry aside, the societal problems wasn't explored much beyond "there's a shit ton of bandits and there's a shit ton of mafia". The mafia people doesn't even look Oriental.
There are 2 things I hate about canon RWBY Mistral.
1) The fact that its Oriental (which is a stupid mishmash of Chinese and Japanese because the west are stupid), mixed with FUCKING GREEK. LIKE WHY THE FUCK GREEK.
2) the country wasn't fully or at least, well explored in the canon. The rampant banditry aside, the societal problems wasn't explored much beyond "there's a shit ton of bandits and there's a shit ton of mafia". The mafia people doesn't even look Oriental.
2/9 c13 Guest
Once again. Cri
Once again. Cri
2/9 c6 Guest
Cri
Cri
2/9 c1 Guest
Oh that's a very different start so far. Looking forward to the other...60 chapters lmao
Oh that's a very different start so far. Looking forward to the other...60 chapters lmao
2/9 c60 UkrainianSpy
Holy shit this story is amazing, i binged the whole story in one day and man do i want more. Keep up the Amazing work, can't wait for the next chapter.
Holy shit this story is amazing, i binged the whole story in one day and man do i want more. Keep up the Amazing work, can't wait for the next chapter.
2/4 c61 Silverfox72
this is glorious gotta say the wait is worth it but your cloffhangers are aomething to be aplauded truly do i both hate and love the wait for the next chapter
this is glorious gotta say the wait is worth it but your cloffhangers are aomething to be aplauded truly do i both hate and love the wait for the next chapter
2/2 c61 Guest
FINALLY, A NEW CHAPTER. I AM BLESSED.
FINALLY, A NEW CHAPTER. I AM BLESSED.
2/2 c61 DireProphet
Waiting for this MFer to stare down the Grimm Remnants after the fight and basically make em run XD
Waiting for this MFer to stare down the Grimm Remnants after the fight and basically make em run XD
2/2 c61 Lich
I apologize for the review, English is not my native language and the translator changed some names from the game. Naturally not Herman but Gherman and Great Ones, not Velium
I apologize for the review, English is not my native language and the translator changed some names from the game. Naturally not Herman but Gherman and Great Ones, not Velium
2/1 c61 Lich
Dear author. I'm glad you've returned to us and presented us with a new chapter.
I haven't left any reviews of your story before, but I've been following it for a long time.
So I'll promise to leave my impressions of it. I'm glad you're expanding the world of Remnant, it's really poorly written despite the number of seasons of the show, but that's the format of the show. You've faced a difficult task, both worlds from the crossover didn't go into detail about the world structure. In RWBY we know the basics and information about the political system, but we don't have a deep dive into different topics (Vale council, the Institute of Hunters, renegade hunters, the criminal world except for certain individuals, dust mines, dust, fairly tails, etc.)
In Bloodborne we only have detailed information about the hunters themselves (and that's very little, what happened to the workshop hunters after it was closed, how the church giants came to be and how they were integrated into Yharnam society, we don't know anything about the church religion except that people worship blood and the Great Ones, we don't know about blood alchemy, we don't know why the impurebloods look like vampires and why their mutation of beastiality is different, what other variants of beastiality are there except for the evolution line of wolves and bloodsuckers with gargoyles, how blood weapons are made and about the blood gems and bloodstones themselves, we know practically nothing about the Pthumerian culture before degradation and their connection with people (I personally believe that people are descended from them, the impurebloods are definitely connected to Queen Yharnam), how the church did not allow the plague of the beast to go beyond Yharnam, where they make the damn bloody alcohol and what brands there are, how they choose the Blood Saints and so on ad infinitum).
Unfortunately, Bloodborne is a very small game, the developers tried to compensate for this with bowls (although I love Laurent and Izs, but the only difference there is in the filter and the presence of 1-2 unique rooms for Pthumeru (a room with 3 tiers and a park with elevators) and Laurent (bridges over the abyss), traps in Izs with teleportation and a rare boss room with a well, but in fact the variety of opponents in them and the main game is very small, the developers also limit some opponents to certain locations, which further narrows the choice among them, as well as the unique locations are few (almost all - the city). The game 100% needs a sequel, but Sony does not want to give it to us, they have all the rights. Thanks to them for the Demon Souls remake at least.
What I'm getting at is that I'm very glad to see the deepening of the RWBY world, but I ask you to do the same for Bloodborne, too much emphasis is on the narrative, a large part of the text about Yharnam contains battle scenes, in them there is only action, because of this it is difficult to show interest in this part of the text, it returns in the moments with Herman and the doll, the interaction of the characters and when Herman tells Jaune about this or that object.
I am passionate about both worlds, I really liked the idea of adding Uncle Weiss, it's a pity that he stayed with us for a little while, but it's sad when everything new comes only from one side, I understand that in Bloodborne there is little to talk to except for the characters from the chapel, Gilbert, Eileen, my best friends from the dream and False Iosefka, perhaps you can repeat the same trick as with Uncle Weiss, only in Yharnam. Although there are a lot of flashbacks, they do not give such meaning as Remnante, because we understand that everything has already passed, because of this it is difficult to catch interest in what we have already seen, when in RWBY there are events that are new to us. I hope I was able to convey my thoughts.
The Chalices are waiting for us, we all love and hate them, I hope you can make them more unique than the froms did and add more zest to each of them.
Perhaps because of what I wrote above, it could have been the impression that I don't like your work. In fact, it's the opposite, I really like it, I look forward to each chapter, I just hope that Jaune will have more drama in RWBY, considering that right now for such a monster as him everything is going too well. Maybe you will decide to kill one of the sisters, this will probably stir him up. And since Jaune was able to get to Yharnam, it means that the Velium can reach him, I really want to see what mark they left in the history of Remnant
Dear author. I'm glad you've returned to us and presented us with a new chapter.
I haven't left any reviews of your story before, but I've been following it for a long time.
So I'll promise to leave my impressions of it. I'm glad you're expanding the world of Remnant, it's really poorly written despite the number of seasons of the show, but that's the format of the show. You've faced a difficult task, both worlds from the crossover didn't go into detail about the world structure. In RWBY we know the basics and information about the political system, but we don't have a deep dive into different topics (Vale council, the Institute of Hunters, renegade hunters, the criminal world except for certain individuals, dust mines, dust, fairly tails, etc.)
In Bloodborne we only have detailed information about the hunters themselves (and that's very little, what happened to the workshop hunters after it was closed, how the church giants came to be and how they were integrated into Yharnam society, we don't know anything about the church religion except that people worship blood and the Great Ones, we don't know about blood alchemy, we don't know why the impurebloods look like vampires and why their mutation of beastiality is different, what other variants of beastiality are there except for the evolution line of wolves and bloodsuckers with gargoyles, how blood weapons are made and about the blood gems and bloodstones themselves, we know practically nothing about the Pthumerian culture before degradation and their connection with people (I personally believe that people are descended from them, the impurebloods are definitely connected to Queen Yharnam), how the church did not allow the plague of the beast to go beyond Yharnam, where they make the damn bloody alcohol and what brands there are, how they choose the Blood Saints and so on ad infinitum).
Unfortunately, Bloodborne is a very small game, the developers tried to compensate for this with bowls (although I love Laurent and Izs, but the only difference there is in the filter and the presence of 1-2 unique rooms for Pthumeru (a room with 3 tiers and a park with elevators) and Laurent (bridges over the abyss), traps in Izs with teleportation and a rare boss room with a well, but in fact the variety of opponents in them and the main game is very small, the developers also limit some opponents to certain locations, which further narrows the choice among them, as well as the unique locations are few (almost all - the city). The game 100% needs a sequel, but Sony does not want to give it to us, they have all the rights. Thanks to them for the Demon Souls remake at least.
What I'm getting at is that I'm very glad to see the deepening of the RWBY world, but I ask you to do the same for Bloodborne, too much emphasis is on the narrative, a large part of the text about Yharnam contains battle scenes, in them there is only action, because of this it is difficult to show interest in this part of the text, it returns in the moments with Herman and the doll, the interaction of the characters and when Herman tells Jaune about this or that object.
I am passionate about both worlds, I really liked the idea of adding Uncle Weiss, it's a pity that he stayed with us for a little while, but it's sad when everything new comes only from one side, I understand that in Bloodborne there is little to talk to except for the characters from the chapel, Gilbert, Eileen, my best friends from the dream and False Iosefka, perhaps you can repeat the same trick as with Uncle Weiss, only in Yharnam. Although there are a lot of flashbacks, they do not give such meaning as Remnante, because we understand that everything has already passed, because of this it is difficult to catch interest in what we have already seen, when in RWBY there are events that are new to us. I hope I was able to convey my thoughts.
The Chalices are waiting for us, we all love and hate them, I hope you can make them more unique than the froms did and add more zest to each of them.
Perhaps because of what I wrote above, it could have been the impression that I don't like your work. In fact, it's the opposite, I really like it, I look forward to each chapter, I just hope that Jaune will have more drama in RWBY, considering that right now for such a monster as him everything is going too well. Maybe you will decide to kill one of the sisters, this will probably stir him up. And since Jaune was able to get to Yharnam, it means that the Velium can reach him, I really want to see what mark they left in the history of Remnant