2/1 c61 TheSadHobGob
there are several mistakes in here like words not being spaced out "likethisandstuff" and a word not being fully spelled out "all that mattThe brief"

2/1 c60 Scarease
with shear guts ,and right tools ,strangth and determination .

2/1 c1 Jasperj07
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1/22 c24 DarthPrince
Damn, what a tricky situation. If only Jaune had aura. But it's not a good idea for him to have aura - it can attract grimm, ya know?

1/12 c60 speeeeed
Love the story, but we really didnt need twp whole chapters on Oto and Salmon lol.

Basically, over the last two chapters Jaune has gotten revenge on the person who started the Breach and picked up another straggler. Two thibgs that id argue are both unnessecary.

1/8 c32 adriborg8
god damnit don't do polls to decide doing romance. Just write the story and see how it develops when you write the story because it shouldn't be a goal for a mostly action and drama story like this it should be a product of circumstances like how people usually get together since when you search for live it doesn't last as long as love that happened by circumstances like people in a gaming group getting together after hanging around long enough. they didn't go there to get a partner just to have fun, and they happened to share interest that sparked chemistry. NEVER make romance a goal it should always be a product of characters interacting naturally (unless the story is a romance story in the first place)

1/4 c37 anonymev2
Hello, I suck at English and never have any inspiration to leave a review so I "allow" myself to give a rating (Warning my review has no value! You must not change it at the request of readers! You are the author! Love
6.5/10