
4/13/2022 c1 Guest
I did not exect the hunter to be Jaune of all people. Great job!
I did not exect the hunter to be Jaune of all people. Great job!
4/5/2022 c1 J789
This story promise to be really good, good job.
This story promise to be really good, good job.
4/4/2022 c1 A Petty Theif
I'm confused as all hell on Jaune. is it a different jaune or the same one? Still Tho. this story is looking really good so far. Can't wait for more.
I'm confused as all hell on Jaune. is it a different jaune or the same one? Still Tho. this story is looking really good so far. Can't wait for more.
4/3/2022 c1 Guest
Please continue this story. It is very well written. Also sorry for bad English.
Please continue this story. It is very well written. Also sorry for bad English.
4/2/2022 c1 crow del de ojos rojos
i love him, i really love him, he's so good in every conceivable way i can't say anything bad about this, he reminds me a lot of amonst nosotroa, were you inspired by him? if so, good choice, he is one of my favorite fics
i love him, i really love him, he's so good in every conceivable way i can't say anything bad about this, he reminds me a lot of amonst nosotroa, were you inspired by him? if so, good choice, he is one of my favorite fics
4/1/2022 c1
8NlaEid
Good start! I've been seeing a lot of Bloodborne crossovers pop up recently, so I'm eager to see where this one goes.

Good start! I've been seeing a lot of Bloodborne crossovers pop up recently, so I'm eager to see where this one goes.
3/31/2022 c1 Oliver Otter1
Awesome first chapter everything flowed so well, cant wait to read more :D very excited for this story
Awesome first chapter everything flowed so well, cant wait to read more :D very excited for this story
3/31/2022 c1 nlou
only the first chapter but I can tell you put yourself into it. I'd say you captured the gruesome, gritty nature of yharnum in jaun's thoughts pretty well and I'm very much looking forward to more. Keep up the good fight with your mental my dude, I'm sure it'll get better for you soon <3
only the first chapter but I can tell you put yourself into it. I'd say you captured the gruesome, gritty nature of yharnum in jaun's thoughts pretty well and I'm very much looking forward to more. Keep up the good fight with your mental my dude, I'm sure it'll get better for you soon <3