7/29/2022 c1 Lucia
His Golden eyes...

5/10/2022 c1 8Qtkittee
I am sorry. I thought I reviewed this. I love how your writing captures the yearning on both sides. Her connection to him is strong yet she fights it because of the bad things he has done. And the line about his trembling lip spoke volumes. Your writing like his cloak envelopes us too as we are left bereft, longing for more. Thank you for this what if glimpse. You inspire me to write a short piece. I am so stuck and overwhelmed by all the things I do not think I can do a long piece justice. Wishing you all the best.

4/1/2022 c1 7CatarinaK
that was...somewhat deserved. I wish Christine in ALW's version was just as strong as she is in Leroux's book!

3/31/2022 c1 27CharlieBoneFan
Nice work.