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4/1/2022 c1 
4GaZe.ZeroDang sad this is so short but I’m really happy you included references to their actual backstory. Most people just use a fake backstory for Neo or don’t even include one, this really played well into their personality’s. Good stuff
4/1/2022 c1 17Cypher DSVery cute. Neo being mute forces you to get creative with her body language and here she has tons of fun expressions and reactions.
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