for Heroic Atonement10/20/2024 c8 Guest
I love this story and I can't wait for the next chapters
I love this story and I can't wait for the next chapters
10/17/2024 c2 Lyra
Basically his current body can't handle all his abilities
Basically his current body can't handle all his abilities
9/12/2024 c7 
2Lil Author Vert
Bro dropped one if the best mha crossover fics then stopped writing... lord
2Lil Author VertBro dropped one if the best mha crossover fics then stopped writing... lord
9/12/2024 c4 Lil Author Vert
Dont even play like that tho, All might at his strongest still is not beating Might Gai
Dont even play like that tho, All might at his strongest still is not beating Might Gai
9/12/2024 c1 Lil Author Vert
Writers be like "give it timethe nerfing is temporary" and then never finish the story. No, you will not be given time and the fanfic police will arrive at your house soon!
Writers be like "give it timethe nerfing is temporary" and then never finish the story. No, you will not be given time and the fanfic police will arrive at your house soon!
4/10/2024 c8 alternativegwenchan
Well..this story is very old and I doubt it would be updated but this is a really great fic! I like the characterization of Sasuke here and how you made him kinda fit in the BNHA world. Though to be honest it kinda felt weird for Sasuke(who is supposedly to be an adult in his original body-) flirting with the Teens in here. Much appreciated if we don't force on any romance here to avoid any conflict with the readers. If you ever read this, this fic has great potential!
Well..this story is very old and I doubt it would be updated but this is a really great fic! I like the characterization of Sasuke here and how you made him kinda fit in the BNHA world. Though to be honest it kinda felt weird for Sasuke(who is supposedly to be an adult in his original body-) flirting with the Teens in here. Much appreciated if we don't force on any romance here to avoid any conflict with the readers. If you ever read this, this fic has great potential!
10/5/2023 c8 scopesmaster
It’s pretty good for your first story. Its shame to see it most likely being abandoned
It’s pretty good for your first story. Its shame to see it most likely being abandoned
8/25/2023 c8 Cutiesweetnesss
This is a great story! I know it was last updated more than a year ago, but plzzzz update it!
This is a great story! I know it was last updated more than a year ago, but plzzzz update it!
8/9/2023 c8 Guest
I loved it please please continue
I loved it please please continue
1/15/2023 c8 Guest
Good story so far. So who’s Sasuke gonna be paired with?
Good story so far. So who’s Sasuke gonna be paired with?
9/6/2022 c8 Guest
Please update, I love this story
Please update, I love this story
9/6/2022 c8 Rexsilver07
I just found your fic! Yay! What a nice story. Idk about you but it's kinda rare to find Sasuke centric fic without focusing on shipping. But anyway, your fic is wonderful.
The writing is nice, it looks neat and very pleasant to read. Ah, I also appreciate how you don't use many unnecessary japanese words such as Kaa-san, arigatou, dobe, etc. Those kind of words can be translated into English with no problem. Imo having some unnecessary japanese words here and there makes the flow a bit off. I have no idea how to describe it with my poor vocabulary. It just feel unnatural, even some people consider it cringe.
I can't say much about your characters for now since it's still early but they're decent. There's so much room for development, so I'm looking forward to see how they'll become.
Oh, I'm definitely excited to see or... read the next chapter. And don't worry, just take your time. I used to be a writer too. I wrote 1,2k per chapter, but now with all my business irl, I don't know when will my writer block be gone. So I understand your situation.
See you in the next chapter! I hope you have a beautiful day!
I just found your fic! Yay! What a nice story. Idk about you but it's kinda rare to find Sasuke centric fic without focusing on shipping. But anyway, your fic is wonderful.
The writing is nice, it looks neat and very pleasant to read. Ah, I also appreciate how you don't use many unnecessary japanese words such as Kaa-san, arigatou, dobe, etc. Those kind of words can be translated into English with no problem. Imo having some unnecessary japanese words here and there makes the flow a bit off. I have no idea how to describe it with my poor vocabulary. It just feel unnatural, even some people consider it cringe.
I can't say much about your characters for now since it's still early but they're decent. There's so much room for development, so I'm looking forward to see how they'll become.
Oh, I'm definitely excited to see or... read the next chapter. And don't worry, just take your time. I used to be a writer too. I wrote 1,2k per chapter, but now with all my business irl, I don't know when will my writer block be gone. So I understand your situation.
See you in the next chapter! I hope you have a beautiful day!