for Shed no Grace on Me23h c36 Guest
Man, this one felt a lil like a cut away from what we just experienced, but was A1. I feel it would've been a bit easier to use far more shadow clones on the knight and just hang back to charge a rasenshurikan up. I doubt the knight could truly handle hundreds of clones on his ass.
Also, it struck me as more a good guy who just didn't know he was doing wrong by preventing Naruto from getting to the girl. With that in mind, u said "girl". I know our boi is still pretty young after the Shinobi war(turned 17), but... He's not getting a visit from Chris Hansen or turning into EDP445 is he?
I hope u continue this story. I really enjoy it, and I'll be making my way to read other stuff of yours soon.
Till then, thanks for the amazing story, and hope to read more of it soon!
Man, this one felt a lil like a cut away from what we just experienced, but was A1. I feel it would've been a bit easier to use far more shadow clones on the knight and just hang back to charge a rasenshurikan up. I doubt the knight could truly handle hundreds of clones on his ass.
Also, it struck me as more a good guy who just didn't know he was doing wrong by preventing Naruto from getting to the girl. With that in mind, u said "girl". I know our boi is still pretty young after the Shinobi war(turned 17), but... He's not getting a visit from Chris Hansen or turning into EDP445 is he?
I hope u continue this story. I really enjoy it, and I'll be making my way to read other stuff of yours soon.
Till then, thanks for the amazing story, and hope to read more of it soon!
5/11 c36 Guest
Nah keep updating my guy. I love ur other stuff but this is GAS.
Nah keep updating my guy. I love ur other stuff but this is GAS.
5/11 c35 Guest
The last chapter... Man I've finally arrived.
I've enjoyed this one. The aftermath of the mesmer fight, but that nightmare... Sheesh. Is that what happens if Naruto gives in to the frenzied flame or burns the tree down?
The last chapter... Man I've finally arrived.
I've enjoyed this one. The aftermath of the mesmer fight, but that nightmare... Sheesh. Is that what happens if Naruto gives in to the frenzied flame or burns the tree down?
5/11 c34 Guest
I couldn't help but hear "dumb wit it" "hit em hard" or "hurt(T.I version)" when naruto said f swords imma run the ones lol. Glad he didn't kill mesmer, and i like how similar the 2 men are. Both were cast aside by those they loved and went 2 completely different directions. Hope sumn good come of this and we get mesmer as a good ally.
I couldn't help but hear "dumb wit it" "hit em hard" or "hurt(T.I version)" when naruto said f swords imma run the ones lol. Glad he didn't kill mesmer, and i like how similar the 2 men are. Both were cast aside by those they loved and went 2 completely different directions. Hope sumn good come of this and we get mesmer as a good ally.
5/11 c34 Guest
I always had the feeling u were either English, Australian, or Irish lol. Comes across in how u have some phrases like mum, jot, bugger, etc lol. But yeah I get u with that job thing. Sometimes stuff at mine gets ass. Im just thankful I have a boss who mostly just a chill guy and down to help. I've found sometimes meditation and delving into my hobbies alleviates some of that pent up feeling I get. Also, a decent workout. With ur age u may not be able to lift like I do, but a guy called Jaxblade on YouTube should have some helpful videos for u.
I hope things get better man. Also, try getting at least 7 hours of sleep. I know it's hard but it's so worth it in the end.
I always had the feeling u were either English, Australian, or Irish lol. Comes across in how u have some phrases like mum, jot, bugger, etc lol. But yeah I get u with that job thing. Sometimes stuff at mine gets ass. Im just thankful I have a boss who mostly just a chill guy and down to help. I've found sometimes meditation and delving into my hobbies alleviates some of that pent up feeling I get. Also, a decent workout. With ur age u may not be able to lift like I do, but a guy called Jaxblade on YouTube should have some helpful videos for u.
I hope things get better man. Also, try getting at least 7 hours of sleep. I know it's hard but it's so worth it in the end.
5/11 c33 Guest
Man things are getting good. Melina being taken over by the gloam eyed queen and trying to force herself on Naruto, only for rellana to shut it all down by making melina jealous is so funny. Ripping the eye out reminds me of how the Uchiha get down. Any chance Naruto can use his chakra to regrow her eye as a normal eye? Also, what's up with the flames being far more dangerous for Naruto to touch? Destined death right? Can't wait to see how Naruto handles round 2!
Man things are getting good. Melina being taken over by the gloam eyed queen and trying to force herself on Naruto, only for rellana to shut it all down by making melina jealous is so funny. Ripping the eye out reminds me of how the Uchiha get down. Any chance Naruto can use his chakra to regrow her eye as a normal eye? Also, what's up with the flames being far more dangerous for Naruto to touch? Destined death right? Can't wait to see how Naruto handles round 2!
5/11 c32 Guest
Dang only 4 chapters left till I'm caught up. Really loving ur story so far. Giving more love to the characters than the game did imo.
Love how Naruto bringing a bit of his denseness back lol.
Dang only 4 chapters left till I'm caught up. Really loving ur story so far. Giving more love to the characters than the game did imo.
Love how Naruto bringing a bit of his denseness back lol.
5/11 c31 Guest
Man this was a fun chapter. Ngl I've been where Naruto is rn with Re. Met a girl who wasn't loved by the person she felt love for, but when I came in and treated her kindly, she changed focus from him to me. I feel this is a thing with ppl. When someone does nice things for u, u gotta treat em well. Not just from obligation but desire to show gratitude. Treat ppl the way u want to be treated, otherwise they may not stay for long.
Man this was a fun chapter. Ngl I've been where Naruto is rn with Re. Met a girl who wasn't loved by the person she felt love for, but when I came in and treated her kindly, she changed focus from him to me. I feel this is a thing with ppl. When someone does nice things for u, u gotta treat em well. Not just from obligation but desire to show gratitude. Treat ppl the way u want to be treated, otherwise they may not stay for long.
5/11 c30 Guest
Bruh RADAHN is back? Let's GOOOO! I love his interactions with Naruto. I feel hed have been a good big brother to him and invaluable if Naruto managed to save him. Gives me cyber elf MegaMan X/force ghost Obi wan vibes.
That being said I think it's interesting how u had him fall into the realm from the lands of giants. Talk about a pitfall. That being said I'm guessing the messed up realm is another places he'll have to save? Any chance nature energy could make it better? And oh no, miquella is taking moghs body to put RADAHN in it isn't she? Any chance Naruto can stop her? If clapping cheeks doesn't work, maybe Radahn can just resist going into moghs body?
Also, if I may ask, is Naruto getting any stronger on his own? I know he's gaining power from the great runes and malenias upgrades, but what about sage mode, kuramas chakra modes, and chakra control? Idk, I kinda think about it like Goku/Ben 10 does. Just because u get new abilities doesn't mean u let the old ones go to waste by not improving them.
Bruh RADAHN is back? Let's GOOOO! I love his interactions with Naruto. I feel hed have been a good big brother to him and invaluable if Naruto managed to save him. Gives me cyber elf MegaMan X/force ghost Obi wan vibes.
That being said I think it's interesting how u had him fall into the realm from the lands of giants. Talk about a pitfall. That being said I'm guessing the messed up realm is another places he'll have to save? Any chance nature energy could make it better? And oh no, miquella is taking moghs body to put RADAHN in it isn't she? Any chance Naruto can stop her? If clapping cheeks doesn't work, maybe Radahn can just resist going into moghs body?
Also, if I may ask, is Naruto getting any stronger on his own? I know he's gaining power from the great runes and malenias upgrades, but what about sage mode, kuramas chakra modes, and chakra control? Idk, I kinda think about it like Goku/Ben 10 does. Just because u get new abilities doesn't mean u let the old ones go to waste by not improving them.
5/11 c29 Guest
Not Milena talking shit on latenna lol.
Wish Millicent told them about malenia and how she felt she was losing herself. Is it getting stronger in the mountaintop area? Also that mesmer dream is interesting. I hope u do shadow of the erdtree here. Although I think things will be changedduebto how ur story is going.
Not Milena talking shit on latenna lol.
Wish Millicent told them about malenia and how she felt she was losing herself. Is it getting stronger in the mountaintop area? Also that mesmer dream is interesting. I hope u do shadow of the erdtree here. Although I think things will be changedduebto how ur story is going.
5/11 c29 Guest
Sleep ain't the only thing that "came quickly" lol. So, curious question, Narutos pull out game seems to be as bad as orochimarus ability to stay off of Chris Hansen's radar. Is kurama doing something about his... Fertility? Heavily doubt it's s good idea to go knocking up the team that's supposed to have ur back in the final fight lol. I know 9 months os a long time and theyll be done with the journey B4 that but still.
Sleep ain't the only thing that "came quickly" lol. So, curious question, Narutos pull out game seems to be as bad as orochimarus ability to stay off of Chris Hansen's radar. Is kurama doing something about his... Fertility? Heavily doubt it's s good idea to go knocking up the team that's supposed to have ur back in the final fight lol. I know 9 months os a long time and theyll be done with the journey B4 that but still.
5/11 c28 Guest
I'd be interested in seeing what u write for Naruto doinh after becoming elden lord. Would he try to live a double life going between the lands between and Shinobi world? Would he bring all his friends from the LB to the ninja world? Or bring a few things from the SW to the LB and start a life there leaving the previous one behind? Curious how that'd effect the og Naruto story with the otsosuki coming? Maybe ranni who has power over the moon could be super helpful in stopping that and toneri dropping the moon on everyone?
I also think the Naruto here has grown from his experiences and now abilities, and could more easily dispatch the otsosukis. That being said ... U adding Hinata to the harem one day?
It feels like as Millicent gets closer to becoming malenia, she's getting stronger. The gargoyles were trouble when I fought em but she 1 taps em. That and carved it up quick. Malenia took over Millicent for sec? Could Naruto use a seal or something to keep her locked away? Or have kurana deal with her? Im kinda surprised he hasn't asked Melina about her yet.
Dang, shabriri got done dirty lol. They roasted him, smoked him, and Naruto took his hat. That's what I call hitting a devious lick. Kinda sad I didn't do the finger hunter story. I really liked that guy. And getting elenoras poleblade would be pretty cool.
I wonder what the mimi the mimic is up to?;
Also was the one Naruto forgetting malekith? Mr destined death? Cuz if not, then oof I have no idea who else there could be lol
I'd be interested in seeing what u write for Naruto doinh after becoming elden lord. Would he try to live a double life going between the lands between and Shinobi world? Would he bring all his friends from the LB to the ninja world? Or bring a few things from the SW to the LB and start a life there leaving the previous one behind? Curious how that'd effect the og Naruto story with the otsosuki coming? Maybe ranni who has power over the moon could be super helpful in stopping that and toneri dropping the moon on everyone?
I also think the Naruto here has grown from his experiences and now abilities, and could more easily dispatch the otsosukis. That being said ... U adding Hinata to the harem one day?
It feels like as Millicent gets closer to becoming malenia, she's getting stronger. The gargoyles were trouble when I fought em but she 1 taps em. That and carved it up quick. Malenia took over Millicent for sec? Could Naruto use a seal or something to keep her locked away? Or have kurana deal with her? Im kinda surprised he hasn't asked Melina about her yet.
Dang, shabriri got done dirty lol. They roasted him, smoked him, and Naruto took his hat. That's what I call hitting a devious lick. Kinda sad I didn't do the finger hunter story. I really liked that guy. And getting elenoras poleblade would be pretty cool.
I wonder what the mimi the mimic is up to?;
Also was the one Naruto forgetting malekith? Mr destined death? Cuz if not, then oof I have no idea who else there could be lol
5/11 c27 Guest
Man, did NOT expect Lina to go out like that. Was pretty sad seeing it happen. Meanwhile ranni is jealous she's not getting any Shino-D in her life lol. Im also pretty surprised u set the stage for Fia to not only be able to "reincarnate" Lina, but also speed up their growth with her energy. Interesting take on her powers. If something happens to Naruto, think you'll make them the protagonists? I could see the title being "firstborns" or something alonh the lines. Just don't kill Naruto please.
Meanwhile what's going on in the Shinobi world? Is this B4 or after toneri attempts to kidnap Hinata? Will Naruto be back in time to stop it? Will he be back period? Would be cool if after becoming elden lord he has the power to traverse the realms/universes and bring others with him. Aight, my bad for the long review. Didn't think it'd be this long lol. Good work!
Man, did NOT expect Lina to go out like that. Was pretty sad seeing it happen. Meanwhile ranni is jealous she's not getting any Shino-D in her life lol. Im also pretty surprised u set the stage for Fia to not only be able to "reincarnate" Lina, but also speed up their growth with her energy. Interesting take on her powers. If something happens to Naruto, think you'll make them the protagonists? I could see the title being "firstborns" or something alonh the lines. Just don't kill Naruto please.
Meanwhile what's going on in the Shinobi world? Is this B4 or after toneri attempts to kidnap Hinata? Will Naruto be back in time to stop it? Will he be back period? Would be cool if after becoming elden lord he has the power to traverse the realms/universes and bring others with him. Aight, my bad for the long review. Didn't think it'd be this long lol. Good work!
5/9 c26 Guest
Naruto healing Irina and dispelling the 3 fingers was interesting. Didn't know they connected to her. Also, glad to see Milena isn't going the burn me route.
Naruto healing Irina and dispelling the 3 fingers was interesting. Didn't know they connected to her. Also, glad to see Milena isn't going the burn me route.
5/7 c36 
10Hakuorofan7
I think Melina is more disappointed he probably attracted another of her siblings into the mix...Trina does count as one right? Considering the situation with Marika and Radagon I think the same applies to Miqulla and Trina. Been a bit since I've seen this story and with quite a bit left can't wait to see what's next...plus whatever new is revealed in Nightfall.
10Hakuorofan7I think Melina is more disappointed he probably attracted another of her siblings into the mix...Trina does count as one right? Considering the situation with Marika and Radagon I think the same applies to Miqulla and Trina. Been a bit since I've seen this story and with quite a bit left can't wait to see what's next...plus whatever new is revealed in Nightfall.