for Shed no Grace on Me8/17 c32 
4Blade1986
Looks like things are about to get interesting for Naruto again… Looking forward to what comes next.
4Blade1986Looks like things are about to get interesting for Naruto again… Looking forward to what comes next.
8/17 c32 kademrobillard
Another great chapter. Please consider doing these one weekly. I eould love to see the end of this one. Its so good snd the characters are flesshed out well. Thank you once more.
Another great chapter. Please consider doing these one weekly. I eould love to see the end of this one. Its so good snd the characters are flesshed out well. Thank you once more.
8/17 c32 2Dragonkeeper10
So much insanity in this one. Rellana likes Naruto, someone else just figured out the Carian tradition, and Messmer, for your actions with Melina you are about to receive a royal smackdown for it. Romnia will as well. Cause you mindcontrol or manipulate Naruto's loves ones, you're getting a fist through your rib cage.
Also goor on Latenna for being the only companion to not fall to mind control who accidentially came here with Naruto. She's doing good. Ansbach and the others in the future will be great. Jolly Cooperation for all!
2Dragonkeeper10So much insanity in this one. Rellana likes Naruto, someone else just figured out the Carian tradition, and Messmer, for your actions with Melina you are about to receive a royal smackdown for it. Romnia will as well. Cause you mindcontrol or manipulate Naruto's loves ones, you're getting a fist through your rib cage.
Also goor on Latenna for being the only companion to not fall to mind control who accidentially came here with Naruto. She's doing good. Ansbach and the others in the future will be great. Jolly Cooperation for all!
8/17 c32 Gallantmon228
Weekly updates would indeed be nice. and, uh oh. Methinks Naruto is about to be in a great deal of trouble. To say nothing of what will happen when Lannseax finds out about that. Keep up the great work, and please, dont get discouraged and leave. That would be a tremendous loss, i think. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Weekly updates would indeed be nice. and, uh oh. Methinks Naruto is about to be in a great deal of trouble. To say nothing of what will happen when Lannseax finds out about that. Keep up the great work, and please, dont get discouraged and leave. That would be a tremendous loss, i think. I can't wait to see what happens next.
8/17 c32 ZeroHour00
I'm trying to think of something to say about this chapter, but the only thing that comes to mind is, "Well...shit"
I'm trying to think of something to say about this chapter, but the only thing that comes to mind is, "Well...shit"
8/17 c32 6The Faceless Wordsmith
I love how the ring zapped him AFTER Naruto got himself in this comical mess. No help in the moment from anyone. Melina is the first stand (against?) Naruto in the world of shadows... who will fall next? And Greyroll? Would she be disappointed or annoyed? Doubt it, she'd probably be smug she got Naruto first and then take Naruto again just to prove her superiority.
6The Faceless WordsmithI love how the ring zapped him AFTER Naruto got himself in this comical mess. No help in the moment from anyone. Melina is the first stand (against?) Naruto in the world of shadows... who will fall next? And Greyroll? Would she be disappointed or annoyed? Doubt it, she'd probably be smug she got Naruto first and then take Naruto again just to prove her superiority.
8/17 c32 214NeonZangetsu
Not a lot of feedback for this chapter, it seems. That’s a proper shame, but I did my best given how rushed I was, with everyone clamoring for a new chapter.
I’m sorry if I let anyone down …T_T
Tired,
~Nz.
214NeonZangetsuNot a lot of feedback for this chapter, it seems. That’s a proper shame, but I did my best given how rushed I was, with everyone clamoring for a new chapter.
I’m sorry if I let anyone down …T_T
Tired,
~Nz.
8/17 c32 Ts22
oh no, now melina has become an boss for Naruto to fight, it's getting tok intense, want to read nore if it, keep up the good work and rest well
oh no, now melina has become an boss for Naruto to fight, it's getting tok intense, want to read nore if it, keep up the good work and rest well
8/17 c32 Snake551g
Grear chapter man keep up the good work. Also do not worry about your relesse schedule go at a pace where you are comfortable and not stressed by it. Thanks for the chapter!
Grear chapter man keep up the good work. Also do not worry about your relesse schedule go at a pace where you are comfortable and not stressed by it. Thanks for the chapter!
8/17 c32 3Kenka
Oh, things are getting heated!
Albenarich family reunion.
Fia... doing what Fia does.
Millicent... emerging from a Pool of Rot WTF!
And the return of the Gloam-Eyed Queen (allegedly)
One of my theories about Melina is that she was Marika's Left Hand, while Messmer rained fire and death as her chief enforcer, Melina skulked in the shadows as her relentless assassin, Brute Force and Subtlety working hand in hand. Until she was tasked with subduing Messmer which ended with her burned, thus the scars, and Messmer knew he was betrayed, thus his grudge.
3KenkaOh, things are getting heated!
Albenarich family reunion.
Fia... doing what Fia does.
Millicent... emerging from a Pool of Rot WTF!
And the return of the Gloam-Eyed Queen (allegedly)
One of my theories about Melina is that she was Marika's Left Hand, while Messmer rained fire and death as her chief enforcer, Melina skulked in the shadows as her relentless assassin, Brute Force and Subtlety working hand in hand. Until she was tasked with subduing Messmer which ended with her burned, thus the scars, and Messmer knew he was betrayed, thus his grudge.