for Thrown Back12/19/2024 c2 Church21
Now he tells Lilly right after meeting her. Think in actively routing for Voldemort in this story now. Just cause this may be the dumbest version of Harry Potter ive ever read. Like si dumb my brain hurts. Fuck this story
Now he tells Lilly right after meeting her. Think in actively routing for Voldemort in this story now. Just cause this may be the dumbest version of Harry Potter ive ever read. Like si dumb my brain hurts. Fuck this story
12/19/2024 c2 Church21
Im guessing this isnt really a story as much as it is word porn with a little bit of plot but you’d think going back in time to a point where Voldemort is still alive Harry would have intrest in Voldi not finding out so he wasnt a priority to kill right away. The best way to do that is to keep it a secret yet Harry spilled his entire life story immediately after popping up in 1976. Then Dumb as a dor decided to tell thee entire Hogwarts staff. Pretty stupid really given the best way to keep a secret is to not tell anyone. At this rate they will just make it part of the welcoming feast speech for the incoming year. I know it wont happen because plot armor but this Harry is such a moron he deserves to lose. On that note the wizarding world culturally is largely stuck in the mid 1700s so likely fairly conservative morally so i highly doubt they’d have alot of sexually active 15 or 16 year olds if they did hogwarts would need a daycare because the majority of the students would be parents befors graduating with how much time they spend unsupervised with no parents around. I know people will say they likely have contraceptives in the wizarding world but we have them in the muggle world to and look how many pregnant high schoolers their are. Anyway thats only a criticism if this is supposed to be a story. If this is word porn then fuck logic and carry on thought it was weird you made prim and proper 15 year oldNarcissa a ho that sleeps with dudes shes only known for a few days. If she got there with Harry in less then a week shes probably run thru half of Slytherin already lol
Im guessing this isnt really a story as much as it is word porn with a little bit of plot but you’d think going back in time to a point where Voldemort is still alive Harry would have intrest in Voldi not finding out so he wasnt a priority to kill right away. The best way to do that is to keep it a secret yet Harry spilled his entire life story immediately after popping up in 1976. Then Dumb as a dor decided to tell thee entire Hogwarts staff. Pretty stupid really given the best way to keep a secret is to not tell anyone. At this rate they will just make it part of the welcoming feast speech for the incoming year. I know it wont happen because plot armor but this Harry is such a moron he deserves to lose. On that note the wizarding world culturally is largely stuck in the mid 1700s so likely fairly conservative morally so i highly doubt they’d have alot of sexually active 15 or 16 year olds if they did hogwarts would need a daycare because the majority of the students would be parents befors graduating with how much time they spend unsupervised with no parents around. I know people will say they likely have contraceptives in the wizarding world but we have them in the muggle world to and look how many pregnant high schoolers their are. Anyway thats only a criticism if this is supposed to be a story. If this is word porn then fuck logic and carry on thought it was weird you made prim and proper 15 year oldNarcissa a ho that sleeps with dudes shes only known for a few days. If she got there with Harry in less then a week shes probably run thru half of Slytherin already lol
12/16/2024 c1 Firehawk2213
NOTICE TO ALL FANS OF THIS STORY
This story is posted on AO3 and it is being actively updated. Chapter 36 has recently been posted to AO3. Not sure why this site isn't being updated.
NOTICE TO ALL FANS OF THIS STORY
This story is posted on AO3 and it is being actively updated. Chapter 36 has recently been posted to AO3. Not sure why this site isn't being updated.
10/19/2024 c30 Guest
If anyone wants to read more the authors has this story on a03 under the same name with 5 new chapters. For some reason he's updating on there.
If anyone wants to read more the authors has this story on a03 under the same name with 5 new chapters. For some reason he's updating on there.
10/13/2024 c30 maiqsmail
So.. abandoned? I've been teased with "proper" action scenes for many chapters because Voldi is about to seriously go on offensive and this gets abandoned right before that time period? Got scared of how much the universe will be forced to change with all his innovations and ducked out? What a shame.
Pretty good story, if one ignores the unashameful cart-load of lemons every chapters.
So.. abandoned? I've been teased with "proper" action scenes for many chapters because Voldi is about to seriously go on offensive and this gets abandoned right before that time period? Got scared of how much the universe will be forced to change with all his innovations and ducked out? What a shame.
Pretty good story, if one ignores the unashameful cart-load of lemons every chapters.
10/13/2024 c19 maiqsmail
It makes no sense that they do not replicate the Listening Teeth on more Death Eaters. It could be argued that they're afraid that many uses would make it conspicuous and DEs will discover it. But they also say that it's hard to discover, so it should not be about the discovery by regular charms check rather than by suspicion from leaked information that the affected are a security breach. Which could be somewhat counteracted by acting only on the most sensitive and important information.
Furthermore, this intelligence/counterintelligence battle could be taken further: plant less obvious charms on some people as a red herring, then act on information overheard from these people specifically so that DE would discover the red herring and lower their guard. Also, don't use just the teeth - with ability to mend cuts with quick healing charm without even potions, they can reasonably inscribe runes over their bones before restoring the flesh on the bones.
And yet furthermore, these implants should not be limited by innocuous listening charms. As a last ditch scheme, they could put a magical version of remote controlled suicide pills in people with a dark mark simultaneous with implanting a separate listening charm. Meaning that if the war picks up for the worst and Voldi would really threaten to win, they could in one activation put a sizeable hole in their ranks. And since the war would be at a very bad stage at the time, there would be no legitimate ministry to prosecute them for that, because "bad stage" for that war would include "puppet ministry run by DEs".
Overall, nice concept, not utilised enough. I wish more stories would go that route. Any recommendations, anyone?
It makes no sense that they do not replicate the Listening Teeth on more Death Eaters. It could be argued that they're afraid that many uses would make it conspicuous and DEs will discover it. But they also say that it's hard to discover, so it should not be about the discovery by regular charms check rather than by suspicion from leaked information that the affected are a security breach. Which could be somewhat counteracted by acting only on the most sensitive and important information.
Furthermore, this intelligence/counterintelligence battle could be taken further: plant less obvious charms on some people as a red herring, then act on information overheard from these people specifically so that DE would discover the red herring and lower their guard. Also, don't use just the teeth - with ability to mend cuts with quick healing charm without even potions, they can reasonably inscribe runes over their bones before restoring the flesh on the bones.
And yet furthermore, these implants should not be limited by innocuous listening charms. As a last ditch scheme, they could put a magical version of remote controlled suicide pills in people with a dark mark simultaneous with implanting a separate listening charm. Meaning that if the war picks up for the worst and Voldi would really threaten to win, they could in one activation put a sizeable hole in their ranks. And since the war would be at a very bad stage at the time, there would be no legitimate ministry to prosecute them for that, because "bad stage" for that war would include "puppet ministry run by DEs".
Overall, nice concept, not utilised enough. I wish more stories would go that route. Any recommendations, anyone?
10/13/2024 c16 maiqsmail
Uggh. You know, I could get behind mother/son incest considering the ample warning. But where the heck cuckold Weasleys came from? Maybe at least put a warning about this shit? Not a fan at all.
Uggh. You know, I could get behind mother/son incest considering the ample warning. But where the heck cuckold Weasleys came from? Maybe at least put a warning about this shit? Not a fan at all.
10/12/2024 c5 maiqsmail
Excuse me, what the fuck? You had a decent story going and turned it into some porn without a plot story?
Do I even need to point out how OOC this whole thing would be for Harry? Even then, what's the reason of leaving them without an Obliviate? His, Blacks and Potters' reputation would be ruined the next day. That's a special edition of Daily Prophet level stuff. This fic seriously turned to the worse in the span of this single chapter.
Excuse me, what the fuck? You had a decent story going and turned it into some porn without a plot story?
Do I even need to point out how OOC this whole thing would be for Harry? Even then, what's the reason of leaving them without an Obliviate? His, Blacks and Potters' reputation would be ruined the next day. That's a special edition of Daily Prophet level stuff. This fic seriously turned to the worse in the span of this single chapter.