for The Wrong Hero3/17 c6 someone
u are writing as if u wanted to make Sadeena, the heroine. Eat shit! u might make it have multiple heroine but Raphtalia should be the first!
u are writing as if u wanted to make Sadeena, the heroine. Eat shit! u might make it have multiple heroine but Raphtalia should be the first!
3/17 c5 someone
u are just changing about raphtalia too much! can't u just let Dante buy her first in order to gain more trust from Sadeena. And Sadeena level was too low!
u are just changing about raphtalia too much! can't u just let Dante buy her first in order to gain more trust from Sadeena. And Sadeena level was too low!
11/21/2024 c14 
3maskedkeeper
Well, pretty much skipping this chapter
the harem doesn't get better knowing the character is 28 and the girl was like ten a week ago.
3maskedkeeperWell, pretty much skipping this chapter
the harem doesn't get better knowing the character is 28 and the girl was like ten a week ago.
10/5/2024 c12 Guest
Que comece o show
Que comece o show
9/30/2024 c4 benjamim2023
Eu gosto de Jojo so as poses do personagem que é estranho,o autor de jojo tem agradar dois públicos gays e héteros
Eu gosto de Jojo so as poses do personagem que é estranho,o autor de jojo tem agradar dois públicos gays e héteros
9/3/2024 c1 3Tactical Narrator
I'd heard people says that Dante should follow through the canon story to avoided on changing the future. But the past was slightly different that an butterfly effect would change his outcome in the long run.
3Tactical NarratorI'd heard people says that Dante should follow through the canon story to avoided on changing the future. But the past was slightly different that an butterfly effect would change his outcome in the long run.
8/26/2024 c55 1Dezzal
This is starting to be a real slog, you have countless chapters devoted to them training and yet he is constantly being over powered. He is only winning his fights by deus ex machine which invalidates all the time we've read of him supposedly training in a superior way. On top of that the degrading curses are getting repetitive and tiring. First it's his arm, then he is a girl, now he is nerfed. Unless this gets back on track it's gonna get dropped which is sad because it had a really strong beginning.
1DezzalThis is starting to be a real slog, you have countless chapters devoted to them training and yet he is constantly being over powered. He is only winning his fights by deus ex machine which invalidates all the time we've read of him supposedly training in a superior way. On top of that the degrading curses are getting repetitive and tiring. First it's his arm, then he is a girl, now he is nerfed. Unless this gets back on track it's gonna get dropped which is sad because it had a really strong beginning.
7/30/2024 c4 Church21
I really like this premis but font really like you haf yhe MC running around telling everyone he read shield hero manga; would have been better had he done what he needed to do anf played more mysterious about himself, secrets only stay secret if you dont tell anyone. Should have played closer to cannon and just dealt with the getting treated poorly shit. Naugomi made it thru fine Dante could have to. He could have just built trust with how he treated them after the fact, bit manipulative sure but less likely someone else screws everything up; also dont really like you gender swapped Keel, just doesnt really add anything and i found her quirks ammusing in cannon. Takes away from the character in my opinion
I really like this premis but font really like you haf yhe MC running around telling everyone he read shield hero manga; would have been better had he done what he needed to do anf played more mysterious about himself, secrets only stay secret if you dont tell anyone. Should have played closer to cannon and just dealt with the getting treated poorly shit. Naugomi made it thru fine Dante could have to. He could have just built trust with how he treated them after the fact, bit manipulative sure but less likely someone else screws everything up; also dont really like you gender swapped Keel, just doesnt really add anything and i found her quirks ammusing in cannon. Takes away from the character in my opinion
7/18/2024 c47 Hyperman15
I’ve been thinking for a while “Did somebody spike my fic?” You definitely laced some crack in this.
I’ve been thinking for a while “Did somebody spike my fic?” You definitely laced some crack in this.