for The Wrong Hero9/3 c1 
3Tactical Narrator
I'd heard people says that Dante should follow through the canon story to avoided on changing the future. But the past was slightly different that an butterfly effect would change his outcome in the long run.
3Tactical NarratorI'd heard people says that Dante should follow through the canon story to avoided on changing the future. But the past was slightly different that an butterfly effect would change his outcome in the long run.
8/26 c55 1Dezzal
This is starting to be a real slog, you have countless chapters devoted to them training and yet he is constantly being over powered. He is only winning his fights by deus ex machine which invalidates all the time we've read of him supposedly training in a superior way. On top of that the degrading curses are getting repetitive and tiring. First it's his arm, then he is a girl, now he is nerfed. Unless this gets back on track it's gonna get dropped which is sad because it had a really strong beginning.
1DezzalThis is starting to be a real slog, you have countless chapters devoted to them training and yet he is constantly being over powered. He is only winning his fights by deus ex machine which invalidates all the time we've read of him supposedly training in a superior way. On top of that the degrading curses are getting repetitive and tiring. First it's his arm, then he is a girl, now he is nerfed. Unless this gets back on track it's gonna get dropped which is sad because it had a really strong beginning.
7/30 c4 Church21
I really like this premis but font really like you haf yhe MC running around telling everyone he read shield hero manga; would have been better had he done what he needed to do anf played more mysterious about himself, secrets only stay secret if you dont tell anyone. Should have played closer to cannon and just dealt with the getting treated poorly shit. Naugomi made it thru fine Dante could have to. He could have just built trust with how he treated them after the fact, bit manipulative sure but less likely someone else screws everything up; also dont really like you gender swapped Keel, just doesnt really add anything and i found her quirks ammusing in cannon. Takes away from the character in my opinion
I really like this premis but font really like you haf yhe MC running around telling everyone he read shield hero manga; would have been better had he done what he needed to do anf played more mysterious about himself, secrets only stay secret if you dont tell anyone. Should have played closer to cannon and just dealt with the getting treated poorly shit. Naugomi made it thru fine Dante could have to. He could have just built trust with how he treated them after the fact, bit manipulative sure but less likely someone else screws everything up; also dont really like you gender swapped Keel, just doesnt really add anything and i found her quirks ammusing in cannon. Takes away from the character in my opinion
7/18 c47 Hyperman15
I’ve been thinking for a while “Did somebody spike my fic?” You definitely laced some crack in this.
I’ve been thinking for a while “Did somebody spike my fic?” You definitely laced some crack in this.
7/18 c43 Hyperman15
I wonder why Sante didn’t try to absorb a recording device in his shield to see if it could grant him a camera shield or something that could provide proof after all the mishaps and midtakes he went through
I wonder why Sante didn’t try to absorb a recording device in his shield to see if it could grant him a camera shield or something that could provide proof after all the mishaps and midtakes he went through
7/18 c40 Hyperman15
That mushroom is incredible, was it a reference to Alessi’s stand? I hope he exploits those spores with monster modification or something.
That mushroom is incredible, was it a reference to Alessi’s stand? I hope he exploits those spores with monster modification or something.
7/16 c8 Hyperman15
Im guessing the last resort letters couldn’t be absorbed by his shield? Otherwise I’d be expecting
<{ Scribe Shield Wisdom increase medium, Note taking speed small, Skill unlocked: log book creation }>
or something like that
Im guessing the last resort letters couldn’t be absorbed by his shield? Otherwise I’d be expecting
<{ Scribe Shield Wisdom increase medium, Note taking speed small, Skill unlocked: log book creation }>
or something like that
6/10 c6 AngrySama
You've changed to many things I can't get into it. The entire point of this story was him knowing the story of the Shield Hero and Melomarc. But no you change it and make it different so your character has to suffer and try you worthless fool. I hate you from the bottom of my cold black shriveled heart.
You've changed to many things I can't get into it. The entire point of this story was him knowing the story of the Shield Hero and Melomarc. But no you change it and make it different so your character has to suffer and try you worthless fool. I hate you from the bottom of my cold black shriveled heart.
3/3 c7 Abyssalwhale
"While it won't completely keep him from getting strong, I felt it would serve as a constant reminder not to bite of more than he can chew."
I mean. That reasoning only works if the person doesn't already know their limits.
As far as I can tell by his character. He basically thought he was walking into a suicide mission anyways. So he already knew it was more than he can handle.
But he had to do it. And he'd probably do it again in a heartbeat. This isn't a learning experience lol. He was caught between a rock and a hard place. And he did the best he could.
"While it won't completely keep him from getting strong, I felt it would serve as a constant reminder not to bite of more than he can chew."
I mean. That reasoning only works if the person doesn't already know their limits.
As far as I can tell by his character. He basically thought he was walking into a suicide mission anyways. So he already knew it was more than he can handle.
But he had to do it. And he'd probably do it again in a heartbeat. This isn't a learning experience lol. He was caught between a rock and a hard place. And he did the best he could.
2/8 c25 2000str
Reading ch 25 i just realize how evil and a creep mc is!
"If I could do it all again, knowing where I'd end up, I know I'd try to kill even more"
all that self recrimination was really warranted, LoL basically mc is saying he would like to kill even more innocents, i mean wtf are you doing?
Reading ch 25 i just realize how evil and a creep mc is!
"If I could do it all again, knowing where I'd end up, I know I'd try to kill even more"
all that self recrimination was really warranted, LoL basically mc is saying he would like to kill even more innocents, i mean wtf are you doing?
10/18/2023 c81 StormChief25
I loved this. I read this over the last week and I must say it is one of the best fanfics I have ever read on any site. You, good author have made a masterpiece. I cant wait to start reading your new story and to see what you write next.
For those looking to see if this should be read, it is a 10/10 and I would recommend this to anyone.
I loved this. I read this over the last week and I must say it is one of the best fanfics I have ever read on any site. You, good author have made a masterpiece. I cant wait to start reading your new story and to see what you write next.
For those looking to see if this should be read, it is a 10/10 and I would recommend this to anyone.
9/2/2023 c81 alexandriaprichard
This is a really good story, and has a lot of care and time put into it. One suggestion I make if possible is to put the fanfiction into crossover category with devil may cry. So you can use the Dante x sidnaa tag, and also allow more discoverablity.
This is a really good story, and has a lot of care and time put into it. One suggestion I make if possible is to put the fanfiction into crossover category with devil may cry. So you can use the Dante x sidnaa tag, and also allow more discoverablity.
8/31/2023 c3 Mattroxursoul
I like it so far. As much as I enjoyed parts of shield hero other parts were just bad. You need competent antagonists to have a great protagonist. I feel like most 12 year olds could out think some of those villains
I like it so far. As much as I enjoyed parts of shield hero other parts were just bad. You need competent antagonists to have a great protagonist. I feel like most 12 year olds could out think some of those villains