
6/23/2024 c55
6Payton79
I was surprised to see Roy was actually pleasant this chapter. The whole time I waited for him to tell Bella es her biological father. But when they looked at the photos, I got the idea that maybe he could be her uncle instead. I'm really shocked to find out that I might be very close there. Can't wait to find out. However, it seemed this chapter that nether Royce nor Alice would make a bad sibling for Bella to have..

I was surprised to see Roy was actually pleasant this chapter. The whole time I waited for him to tell Bella es her biological father. But when they looked at the photos, I got the idea that maybe he could be her uncle instead. I'm really shocked to find out that I might be very close there. Can't wait to find out. However, it seemed this chapter that nether Royce nor Alice would make a bad sibling for Bella to have..
6/23/2024 c55 SassYNoleS
LOVED!
Bella giving it to JaScab and not putting up with his shit was good. I love how Roy Jnr was there also.
So Royce SNR, is not her father, but the link is his sister and a Brandon Kelly?
LOVED the beefy and chapter and so cannot wait for more Xx
LOVED!
Bella giving it to JaScab and not putting up with his shit was good. I love how Roy Jnr was there also.
So Royce SNR, is not her father, but the link is his sister and a Brandon Kelly?
LOVED the beefy and chapter and so cannot wait for more Xx
6/23/2024 c55 mysticfighter111
Bella is getting to the bottom of her parentage. I'm pretty sure that's the reason for Roy's special interest in her. Letting Royce wittness Jake being his ugly self was a good move, I think. He nees to find out about his father's connection to JB as well. Cheers for Edward and the team for the wins, cheers for Bella for inspiring DTOW, it works like a charm. Leah's moving to Dallas, that's good news. A second chance for James?
Bella is getting to the bottom of her parentage. I'm pretty sure that's the reason for Roy's special interest in her. Letting Royce wittness Jake being his ugly self was a good move, I think. He nees to find out about his father's connection to JB as well. Cheers for Edward and the team for the wins, cheers for Bella for inspiring DTOW, it works like a charm. Leah's moving to Dallas, that's good news. A second chance for James?
6/22/2024 c55
7Lizzie Paige
Lots of breadcrumbs here. I think the dinner was actually set up as a family affair, and Bella’s just starting to connect some major dots. Could Roy possibly have used Bella’s glass to check dna to confirm his suspicions, or maybe he already knows and it’s more of a clarification. No other players or their wives get the treatment Bella does, it’s obvious there’s a reason why.
Might have to read over this chapter again to sort some other thoughts as I’m still a bit confuddled on the Kelly King comments. I’m not as quick as Bella to join those dots. LOL

Lots of breadcrumbs here. I think the dinner was actually set up as a family affair, and Bella’s just starting to connect some major dots. Could Roy possibly have used Bella’s glass to check dna to confirm his suspicions, or maybe he already knows and it’s more of a clarification. No other players or their wives get the treatment Bella does, it’s obvious there’s a reason why.
Might have to read over this chapter again to sort some other thoughts as I’m still a bit confuddled on the Kelly King comments. I’m not as quick as Bella to join those dots. LOL
6/22/2024 c55 biblepam
I loved the long update and I'm greatly appreciative. DTOW made me laugh a lot. Very clever. Lots going on this chapter and I'm looking forward to answers in the next one.
I loved the long update and I'm greatly appreciative. DTOW made me laugh a lot. Very clever. Lots going on this chapter and I'm looking forward to answers in the next one.
6/22/2024 c55 ChristyWIX
I very much enjoyed reading Bella putting Jacob in his place. Her conversation with Royce had me worried! As I’m still not one hundred percent sure we can trust either of the King men. Though I very much liked how her and Royce interacted and how much she impressed him. Filling him in on a few things he had no idea about. He now knows to watch out for a few things. I do wonder what he handed Edward in the envelope. Hoping it was something to get Jake out of their lives sooner rather than later. I did like how he said if he did find out he had anything to do with Ben being injured, he'd make sure Jake never had another client in the league again. Didn’t know Bella jumped off and overturned boat and swam to shore before. I’m thrilled Leah sold her home and she’s moving there to Dallas. I think it’ll be a great move for her. Loved the game reenactments you gave through this whole chapter. I laughed so much during Deedee's explanation of DTOW and how the team has taken it to heart. Seems to be working. It was really funny. When they were at Roy's for dinner I thought for sure Bella would see a photo of her mom there somehow. I was glad I was wrong, but knew the photos meant something. Very interesting how this Brandon Kelly is possibly the man they looked for. I’ve no doubt he is and Royce knows it. Though he may just suspect right now. I think his insistence on Bella having a drink, and his man taking her empty glass, is the DNA Royce needs to know for sure. I think he had them to dinner, along with Alice and Jasper, as a 'family' dinner. Without Bella and Edward knowing. Possibly not even Royce knowing. Very much enjoyed Emmett's parents, Lucy and Wade. They were a hoot. Wonderful, wonderful chapter. Thank you.
I very much enjoyed reading Bella putting Jacob in his place. Her conversation with Royce had me worried! As I’m still not one hundred percent sure we can trust either of the King men. Though I very much liked how her and Royce interacted and how much she impressed him. Filling him in on a few things he had no idea about. He now knows to watch out for a few things. I do wonder what he handed Edward in the envelope. Hoping it was something to get Jake out of their lives sooner rather than later. I did like how he said if he did find out he had anything to do with Ben being injured, he'd make sure Jake never had another client in the league again. Didn’t know Bella jumped off and overturned boat and swam to shore before. I’m thrilled Leah sold her home and she’s moving there to Dallas. I think it’ll be a great move for her. Loved the game reenactments you gave through this whole chapter. I laughed so much during Deedee's explanation of DTOW and how the team has taken it to heart. Seems to be working. It was really funny. When they were at Roy's for dinner I thought for sure Bella would see a photo of her mom there somehow. I was glad I was wrong, but knew the photos meant something. Very interesting how this Brandon Kelly is possibly the man they looked for. I’ve no doubt he is and Royce knows it. Though he may just suspect right now. I think his insistence on Bella having a drink, and his man taking her empty glass, is the DNA Royce needs to know for sure. I think he had them to dinner, along with Alice and Jasper, as a 'family' dinner. Without Bella and Edward knowing. Possibly not even Royce knowing. Very much enjoyed Emmett's parents, Lucy and Wade. They were a hoot. Wonderful, wonderful chapter. Thank you.
6/22/2024 c55 traceybuie
So many questions come up with all the new information. Great chapter... Thanks for writing and sharing.
So many questions come up with all the new information. Great chapter... Thanks for writing and sharing.
6/22/2024 c55 DreamerAlday082
OMG! Is Bella a King? My heart is pounding so hard with the possibility!
OMG! Is Bella a King? My heart is pounding so hard with the possibility!
6/22/2024 c55 CynMar Rom
Ho ho holy shiiiit! So she's part of the family!? This should be interesting! I wonder if Royce already knows...
And what the hell will happen with Jacob and Carlisle?
Can't wait to see what's next!
Thanks for sharing!
Ho ho holy shiiiit! So she's part of the family!? This should be interesting! I wonder if Royce already knows...
And what the hell will happen with Jacob and Carlisle?
Can't wait to see what's next!
Thanks for sharing!