4/5/2024 c52 shadow405
Nothing like the drama of a race to the playoffs at the end of a season. And sometimes injuries can make the difference. I hope Ben is ok. And poor Bella. I understand her reasoning for not wanting to bother her parents, but at the same time I don't think she should go forever without answers. These things always have a way of coming out at some point. These days its usually through sites like Ancestry. Maybe Bella should get on one of those. See if she has long lost cousins out there. But she needs to be ready for the answers.

4/4/2024 c52 everlong21
Love the hockey talk and the Cullen couple life. Thanks for the update, as always :)

4/2/2024 c52 twificfan
Awesome!

4/1/2024 c52 1Alice's White Rabbit
Oh, that was a little bombshell mystery about Bella and her blood type! Can't wait to find out the answer of her parentage. And, what has happened to Ben?

Thanks!
Sally

4/1/2024 c52 2fuzzyltlwingedthing
I can't wait to hear from Spider's dad. I expect him to pop out somewhere like a jump scare. Also, the pre-read contest is genius!

4/1/2024 c52 ChristyWIX
Ack! I know you said, a long time ago, this one would stop at sixty chapters, but . . . sigh. I do love this story so much. You’ve developed deep connections with each of these wonderful characters. And I do mean each character. The side characters are also so well written, it'll be sad when it’s over. It is so strange to me how Bella shares Charlie's eyes, but may not be related at all. Maybe someone left the baby at the police station, as we do have those laws saying the parent can do so without ramifications . What is weird though, is their family is so very close, but they never told her she isn’t related to one or both of her parents. What if they do not know? What if she was switched at birth? No, you wouldn’t introduced something this strange with only eight chapters left. I'll wait to see how you play this out. Enjoyed the team heavy writing. I miss watching hockey so much. Our cable company dropped the channel they play on, as they couldn’t reach an agreement. It has been an interesting year not watching our favorite sport. However, it sure isn’t a season to write home about, as they’ve only just hit their seventeenth win (*shudders*) for the season last evening. With a shutout!? I can understand the team saying a 'lower body injury' to the press, but why wouldn’t they go into more detail with the teammates? Odd. Hope he is okay, as they’ll need him down the stretch. Unless this is how you get Edward his Stanley Cup, as he has to be in net each game. Which would be great. What a way to end your career as a player. On the high of winning the cup. Poor Renée and her hair loss. So sad. My MIL lost hers in one fell swoop. She felt an itch, scratched it and the whole head of hair came off in a sort of cradle cap. So bizarre. My husband lost all of his during chemo as well. Found out he has a really nice head under the hair, lol. His all grew back, thankfully. My father never lost his hair during chemo. Some lose it, some don’t. It’s luck of the draw, sadly. I'm thrilled the D Magazine article and photos were a hit with our couple. Whew. Hopefully, they don’t get too much from others about it. Edward could get the photo enlarged and printed as canvas, as a painting for his office wall. She said only one for the house, why not do it up right. Thank you for such a big chapter. Really enjoyed it.

3/31/2024 c52 VryUnique
Edward played awesome in this chapter. They played six games with Edward winning 4 and Ben
loosing 2. I know it's a team sport but his track record was pretty great.
Bella should discreetly get some DNA from her parents, she can decide how to proceed after
she gets the results. I don't think she should approach her mother at all, adding more stress
on her wouldn't be a good idea at this time. If the results show that Charlie isn't her father than
I would be wary about approaching him also, what if he doesn't realize he isn't her biological father?
Thanks for the update.
The bad thing about reading update to update is that you don't always recall all the little details.
I can't remember Charlie and Renee's back story or if Bella shares characteristics with either of them
so it's hard to form any plausible guesses about where the story is going. I'm going to have to go back to the beginning to read what Bella had revealed about her parents. If they were high school sweethearts and had her young than I doubt she was adopted.