for Along Came a Spider 21/7/2024 c46 Shazzeer
Ughhhh, Roy is such a sleaze! Let’s get him out of everyone’s lives!
And she really should’ve talked to Alice, this will so bite her in the ass!
So Rose knows Royce JR and it was before she was with Em.
I bet Royce paid someone to hack Bella’s file from the doctors office. Ugh, I don’t like Roy being mixed into all this.
Ughhhh, Roy is such a sleaze! Let’s get him out of everyone’s lives!
And she really should’ve talked to Alice, this will so bite her in the ass!
So Rose knows Royce JR and it was before she was with Em.
I bet Royce paid someone to hack Bella’s file from the doctors office. Ugh, I don’t like Roy being mixed into all this.
1/7/2024 c45 Shazzeer
Phew, I was worried about how Esme, Charlie and Renee would take it. But they were so happy for them!
Now they can have a banging wedding celebration instead!
Bring on the party!
Phew, I was worried about how Esme, Charlie and Renee would take it. But they were so happy for them!
Now they can have a banging wedding celebration instead!
Bring on the party!
1/7/2024 c44 Shazzeer
Called it! Bet everyone knows they eloped and everyone is all butt hurt!.
At leas Al swallowed his pettiness and came to apologise.
Maybe Roy will get rid of Caius now that he and Victoria are seeing each other ;)
Called it! Bet everyone knows they eloped and everyone is all butt hurt!.
At leas Al swallowed his pettiness and came to apologise.
Maybe Roy will get rid of Caius now that he and Victoria are seeing each other ;)
1/7/2024 c43 Shazzeer
Taking fotos all dressed up in their wedding attire at the Welcome to Las Vegas sign… people are gonna know they eloped, this is gonna be all over the news!
They won’t be able to keep it a secret at all. Someone will recognise Edward!
And see! Plenty people taking photos and videos!
Aaaand now someone’s following them/ spying.
I’ve had a bad feeling from the start about their outing.
Taking fotos all dressed up in their wedding attire at the Welcome to Las Vegas sign… people are gonna know they eloped, this is gonna be all over the news!
They won’t be able to keep it a secret at all. Someone will recognise Edward!
And see! Plenty people taking photos and videos!
Aaaand now someone’s following them/ spying.
I’ve had a bad feeling from the start about their outing.
1/7/2024 c42 Shazzeer
Picking up the license while dressed for the wedding wasn’t so smart. The woman at the office might spill the beans.
I live the idea of stacked rings, you can fit so many more on your fingers :D.
And that dip! *swoons*
Picking up the license while dressed for the wedding wasn’t so smart. The woman at the office might spill the beans.
I live the idea of stacked rings, you can fit so many more on your fingers :D.
And that dip! *swoons*
1/7/2024 c41 Shazzeer
I support them in the elopement. They have a right to do this their own way. Family and friends will still be a part of it when they have their engagement party and announce their elopement then.
I get the whole not seeing the bride before the wedding for the look and all, the excitement.
I support them in the elopement. They have a right to do this their own way. Family and friends will still be a part of it when they have their engagement party and announce their elopement then.
I get the whole not seeing the bride before the wedding for the look and all, the excitement.
1/4/2024 c49 everlong21
Happy New Year! I hope you are feeling better - thank you for writing and bringing us the story.
Love reading all this game and life drama around the happy couple and Pumpkin :)
Happy New Year! I hope you are feeling better - thank you for writing and bringing us the story.
Love reading all this game and life drama around the happy couple and Pumpkin :)
1/3/2024 c49 Gigi725
Happy New Year Kay! Life has been pretty busy so I just got to catch up on the last 4 chapters.. Oh boy do I see a wild ride coming up. I knew Caius was brought in for some reason to make trouble!
I first thought Senior and Caius might be in cahoots - I wouldn't put it past either of them to make Edward look bad or fail.
What is the story of Isabella? Did I miss something in the reading?
After this chapter I think there are a few horrible men trying to make trouble!
Can't wait for more!
Happy New Year Kay! Life has been pretty busy so I just got to catch up on the last 4 chapters.. Oh boy do I see a wild ride coming up. I knew Caius was brought in for some reason to make trouble!
I first thought Senior and Caius might be in cahoots - I wouldn't put it past either of them to make Edward look bad or fail.
What is the story of Isabella? Did I miss something in the reading?
After this chapter I think there are a few horrible men trying to make trouble!
Can't wait for more!
1/2/2024 c49 Mistydeb
Oh my, lots going on with them both right now. He has a lot of worries going round his head right now and I hope Bella is taking peoples warnings about Roy seriously….he sounds like a real nasty piece of work. Let’s hope Edward or Ben don’t get seriously injured during this season and that the paternity tests come back as neither james or Ben are the father..she will play them for fools and bleed them dry if one of them is. Debbie
Oh my, lots going on with them both right now. He has a lot of worries going round his head right now and I hope Bella is taking peoples warnings about Roy seriously….he sounds like a real nasty piece of work. Let’s hope Edward or Ben don’t get seriously injured during this season and that the paternity tests come back as neither james or Ben are the father..she will play them for fools and bleed them dry if one of them is. Debbie
12/29/2023 c49 AnakinSmom
I wouldn't trust Caius further than I could throw him and I do not throw well. And the JB on Caius' phone leads me to think he is working with or for Jacob. Slimy bastards all of them!
I wouldn't trust Caius further than I could throw him and I do not throw well. And the JB on Caius' phone leads me to think he is working with or for Jacob. Slimy bastards all of them!
12/29/2023 c49 
2NKubie
Ugh! So much going on here! We already know that Carlisle and Jake have been in cahoots. Now Caius too?
And Bella having Carlisle' car tracked makes me uncomfortable too, even if it's for a good reason. I don't like her being so devious
This whole chapter made me nervous. Well done, my friend!
Have a Happy New Year!
Stay safe and well!
xo
Nan
2NKubieUgh! So much going on here! We already know that Carlisle and Jake have been in cahoots. Now Caius too?
And Bella having Carlisle' car tracked makes me uncomfortable too, even if it's for a good reason. I don't like her being so devious
This whole chapter made me nervous. Well done, my friend!
Have a Happy New Year!
Stay safe and well!
xo
Nan
12/27/2023 c49 starsmina
It sure seems like Edward has people coming from all sides to derail his career. I think JB is Jacob black of course, but what does KS have to do with him. And he’s acting fishy as well.
It sure seems like Edward has people coming from all sides to derail his career. I think JB is Jacob black of course, but what does KS have to do with him. And he’s acting fishy as well.
12/27/2023 c49 NeeNee246
OH MY! I am excited for more! I am SOOO worried about what Caius, Roy, Carlisle and Jacob! I am freaking out about what each of them is up to! lol ;)
OH MY! I am excited for more! I am SOOO worried about what Caius, Roy, Carlisle and Jacob! I am freaking out about what each of them is up to! lol ;)