for The Will of Gil5/7 c106 BladeWolf19
The last paragraph is definitely completely AI generated, and makes me want to puke. Great story otherwise
The last paragraph is definitely completely AI generated, and makes me want to puke. Great story otherwise
4/17 c104 Magicalzz
As othere reviews have said please continue the story. Begin implementing these new ideas and direction into the fic. it can help prepare you for your next story or rewrite.
As othere reviews have said please continue the story. Begin implementing these new ideas and direction into the fic. it can help prepare you for your next story or rewrite.
4/15 c104 Nico6554
I love this story! Please continue! Feel it could benefit if it’s more Lockhart centric possibly?
Felt it hovered over Tom Riddle’s diary arc for a bit too long
I love this story! Please continue! Feel it could benefit if it’s more Lockhart centric possibly?
Felt it hovered over Tom Riddle’s diary arc for a bit too long
4/15 c104 BBryant
You're 400k words in. It would take years to catch back up with a reboot. Do you dislike what you've written so much that you feel like it needs a restart? I suggest slowly editing the chapters you've already posted or starting a new story while simultaneously finishing this one. I think a lot of writers get motivated after a break to "fix" a big story like this and then get burnt out quickly once they realize how much work it is to make a "perfect" version of a fic this long.
You're 400k words in. It would take years to catch back up with a reboot. Do you dislike what you've written so much that you feel like it needs a restart? I suggest slowly editing the chapters you've already posted or starting a new story while simultaneously finishing this one. I think a lot of writers get motivated after a break to "fix" a big story like this and then get burnt out quickly once they realize how much work it is to make a "perfect" version of a fic this long.
4/14 c104 TRiO
Continue the story as is. Whatever enlightened ideas you have gained from your introspection you can incorporate it down the line as part of character development, gradually.
Continue the story as is. Whatever enlightened ideas you have gained from your introspection you can incorporate it down the line as part of character development, gradually.
4/14 c104 Guest
A story where Nymphadora is a larger and more central part of the story, but Lockhart still bedding other witches left and right would be cooler imo.
A story where Nymphadora is a larger and more central part of the story, but Lockhart still bedding other witches left and right would be cooler imo.
4/13 c104 Guest
continue if you wish
continue if you wish
4/13 c104 
4The Geeky Folkteller
Continue. Rewrites can be dealt with after the work is completed and you have a better picture of what needs to be mixed to make everything tie together.
4The Geeky FolktellerContinue. Rewrites can be dealt with after the work is completed and you have a better picture of what needs to be mixed to make everything tie together.
4/13 c104 3Berthfalls
The mc may seem dislikable or irrational at times who only thinks with his dick or contradics himself by doing out of character things but there are reasons for it that are later explored to be a significant part of the plot. A solid fanfic. 9/10. Pls continue writing. Reboot this story after completing this.
3BerthfallsThe mc may seem dislikable or irrational at times who only thinks with his dick or contradics himself by doing out of character things but there are reasons for it that are later explored to be a significant part of the plot. A solid fanfic. 9/10. Pls continue writing. Reboot this story after completing this.
4/13 c104 dblbob2
keep it going! you can switch it up as needed and itll be the perfect time since the canon hogwarts arc is over
keep it going! you can switch it up as needed and itll be the perfect time since the canon hogwarts arc is over