5/4 c24 1Sox21
I really enjoyed this story.

4/18 c24 2loveybunnies
Loved the story, and I am so sorry that I didn't review every chapter. I was reading on my phone while out of town, and it's impossible for me to write reviews that way. Also, the story was complete, and I just breezed through it! Thanks so much for sharing this with us, and while I do wish it was longer, I appreciate the quick resolve and that you didn't overembellish details or drag out minor points of the story just for length. I am also really sorry that you had such a brutal critique from that "partner" or yours - I think we all can benefit from constructive criticism, but there are tactful ways to provide it without ripping someone apart and being brutal and cruel. I think you did a great job on the story, and I commend you for not giving up! I would love to read more about these two and how their life begins as a married couple, but I understand that you may be done and want to move onto other things. Best of luck, hope to see more from you here!

3/21 c24 debb lavoie
Excellent story, don't ever let anyone tell you that you write badly.

3/21 c21 debb lavoie
Working with Black, ha.

3/21 c18 debb lavoie
Oh crap, why didn't she call the library!
Must be James.

3/21 c15 debb lavoie
Laughing, that dinner was precious.

3/21 c13 debb lavoie
Seth is so cute!