for Stronger Than Blood6/17 c21 teacher1209
Yeah, after I posted my review for the last chapter I figured it would be Jacob.
Yeah, after I posted my review for the last chapter I figured it would be Jacob.
6/17 c16 teacher1209
Holy shit! I DID NOT see that coming! I haven't reviewed any other chapters because I was too busy plowing through this story but I just had to review this one. You gave NO clues and I'm usually pretty good at figuring things out, heck I've had authors ask me if I snuck into their house and read their outline lol.
By the way, this is a GREAT story!
Holy shit! I DID NOT see that coming! I haven't reviewed any other chapters because I was too busy plowing through this story but I just had to review this one. You gave NO clues and I'm usually pretty good at figuring things out, heck I've had authors ask me if I snuck into their house and read their outline lol.
By the way, this is a GREAT story!
14/18 c24 2loveybunnies
Loved the story, and I am so sorry that I didn't review every chapter. I was reading on my phone while out of town, and it's impossible for me to write reviews that way. Also, the story was complete, and I just breezed through it! Thanks so much for sharing this with us, and while I do wish it was longer, I appreciate the quick resolve and that you didn't overembellish details or drag out minor points of the story just for length. I am also really sorry that you had such a brutal critique from that "partner" or yours - I think we all can benefit from constructive criticism, but there are tactful ways to provide it without ripping someone apart and being brutal and cruel. I think you did a great job on the story, and I commend you for not giving up! I would love to read more about these two and how their life begins as a married couple, but I understand that you may be done and want to move onto other things. Best of luck, hope to see more from you here!
Loved the story, and I am so sorry that I didn't review every chapter. I was reading on my phone while out of town, and it's impossible for me to write reviews that way. Also, the story was complete, and I just breezed through it! Thanks so much for sharing this with us, and while I do wish it was longer, I appreciate the quick resolve and that you didn't overembellish details or drag out minor points of the story just for length. I am also really sorry that you had such a brutal critique from that "partner" or yours - I think we all can benefit from constructive criticism, but there are tactful ways to provide it without ripping someone apart and being brutal and cruel. I think you did a great job on the story, and I commend you for not giving up! I would love to read more about these two and how their life begins as a married couple, but I understand that you may be done and want to move onto other things. Best of luck, hope to see more from you here!