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5/28/2023 c11 Guest
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5/23/2023 c8 Guest
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5/19/2023 c5 Guest
Do a film red with run there please
5/18/2023 c4 Guest
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5/12/2023 c1 Guest
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5/10/2023 c1 Guest
PLEEEAAASSEE UPDAAATTEE
5/8/2023 c1 Guest
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5/5/2023 c76 Itsbeentaken
I love this story! I also love the way you write!
5/4/2023 c1 Guest
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4/30/2023 c76 kakathot
The tail end of last chapter and this chapter I have to say were really disappointing to read.

1. Right after Luffy gets destroyed by Kaido, Run wounds and sends Kaido flying with a single attack making Luffy look like some fodder.

2. After doing that to Kaido, Run chooses to turn his back on his captain and escape without Luffy, allowing him to get captured.

3. This one is a a nitpick really but Law calling Run a genius sounds forced and really weird to me not to mention being completely out of character for Law too

4. Run breaks in to prison to free Luffy and Queen simply ignores him and then leaves with Big Mom quickly after? The reason he left in the actual series was because of the collars but Run has no collars on.

5. Luffy and Run’s conversation at the end of the chapter also felt out of place and strange to read like you ran out of things to put it in the foster and decided to add it in to fill the word count.
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