for Conversation and Escalation10/15/2022 c1 
2Xerzo LotCN
Pretty nice lemon thanks
But uh one thing truthfully that isnt how the hymen
Technically no time if probably prepared is supposed to hurt and it only does if they aren't lol
2Xerzo LotCNPretty nice lemon thanks
But uh one thing truthfully that isnt how the hymen
Technically no time if probably prepared is supposed to hurt and it only does if they aren't lol
6/17/2022 c1 leviathanup12
Nice story I laughed when shinji said he watched a certain video and l like seeing rei jealous.
Nice story I laughed when shinji said he watched a certain video and l like seeing rei jealous.
5/28/2022 c1 Blitzstrahl
You forgot the Kom Susser Tod element.
Like Gendo and Futyusuki should have been watching it all happen from the offices security camera.
While Futyusuki mentions everything going to plan.
You forgot the Kom Susser Tod element.
Like Gendo and Futyusuki should have been watching it all happen from the offices security camera.
While Futyusuki mentions everything going to plan.
4/30/2022 c1 ragnarokslayer81
This story was great i always love to see shinji and rei are happy together.
This story was great i always love to see shinji and rei are happy together.
4/26/2022 c1 catspats31
While the writing quality of your story is good in terms of spelling and grammar, please note this part of the Content Guidelines:
"Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference."
You should remove all detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in this story if you want it to remain at this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is allowed like Archive Of Our Own.
While the writing quality of your story is good in terms of spelling and grammar, please note this part of the Content Guidelines:
"Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference."
You should remove all detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in this story if you want it to remain at this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is allowed like Archive Of Our Own.
4/21/2022 c1 4KaiserDreamCancel
There were some grammar issues like "Were too young." Or using Ive instead of I've. But besides that, it's okay for a first attempt at writing smut.
4KaiserDreamCancelThere were some grammar issues like "Were too young." Or using Ive instead of I've. But besides that, it's okay for a first attempt at writing smut.