for Inside of my head I'll forever be lost9/10 c1 selenajhones1
This piece captures Jinx's inner chaos and struggle with her identity and self-worth brilliantly. The dialogue between her and her inner voices is raw and intense, making the reader feel her frustration and anger. The vivid descriptions of her actions and the sensory details pull you into her world of confusion and turmoil, showing how she externalizes her pain. It’s powerful and heartbreaking, giving a real sense of her mental state.
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This piece captures Jinx's inner chaos and struggle with her identity and self-worth brilliantly. The dialogue between her and her inner voices is raw and intense, making the reader feel her frustration and anger. The vivid descriptions of her actions and the sensory details pull you into her world of confusion and turmoil, showing how she externalizes her pain. It’s powerful and heartbreaking, giving a real sense of her mental state.
If you want to chat more about story ideas, Discord works for me! Let me know if that’s good for you, too!
8/8/2022 c1 TheCrimsonFuckeer
Nice story. I like how it shows that Jinx still fears being useless and being abandoned because of it
Nice story. I like how it shows that Jinx still fears being useless and being abandoned because of it