for The Last Shinto Kami3/16 c16 Serafall Leviathan Nii
I really love this story idk why it keeps deleting itself this is like the 6th time it disappeared from my downloads, but I really love the story. I'm kinda wondering how strong Naruto is if he went all out and had something to protect
I really love this story idk why it keeps deleting itself this is like the 6th time it disappeared from my downloads, but I really love the story. I'm kinda wondering how strong Naruto is if he went all out and had something to protect
2/25 c17 Kkmememesha
Really good story, and I definitely recommend it!
Looking forward to Athena, Artemis, and Naruto collab, it'll maybe help him feel better to make stuff to help people when he couldn't before.
Question though, is Artemis still gonna be a virgin goddess later on down the storyline? I doubt Naruto would mind celibacy, but I'm curious.
Really good story, and I definitely recommend it!
Looking forward to Athena, Artemis, and Naruto collab, it'll maybe help him feel better to make stuff to help people when he couldn't before.
Question though, is Artemis still gonna be a virgin goddess later on down the storyline? I doubt Naruto would mind celibacy, but I'm curious.
2/25 c16 L3onidas
Very nice, ingeresting to see whats behind the disease or rather “who” if my guess is correct
Very nice, ingeresting to see whats behind the disease or rather “who” if my guess is correct
2/25 c17 Whatif-inator
Naruto and Artemis’ relationship flourishes. It won’t be long til they officially become a couple. Curious to see how Apollo would react to their relationship. Also hoping to see this universe’s version of Kurama.
Naruto and Artemis’ relationship flourishes. It won’t be long til they officially become a couple. Curious to see how Apollo would react to their relationship. Also hoping to see this universe’s version of Kurama.
2/23 c17 
5Blackcurse01
Glad to know you're alright. I look forward to whatever you write next, your writing is phenomenal.
5Blackcurse01Glad to know you're alright. I look forward to whatever you write next, your writing is phenomenal.
2/22 c17 1iloveM.A.D.B
I'm so glad that I found you as an author! Your stories are amazing. The first story I read of yours was your Marvel one, and I noticed how much love and care you put into it, as well as how much knowledge you have of the subject matter.
I mean, if you ever come back to the Marvel story, that would be very much welcome, but I'm glad that I didn’t do what I normally do when it comes to an author. When they have a story that's in my top 10, I tend to not read their other stories and just reread that one. I'm so glad I didn’t just continue to reread—well, I am still rereading the Marvel one, because, you know...
I'm glad that I found this story as well! I love the care and thought that you put into it. I really like when an author has fun with their writing. You also have a better understanding of character, character motives, and interactions than most other authors on this site.
So, keep up the good work! And I'd like to offer this: if you ever need someone to spitball ideas with, feel free to PM me. I like to help out where I can.
1iloveM.A.D.BI'm so glad that I found you as an author! Your stories are amazing. The first story I read of yours was your Marvel one, and I noticed how much love and care you put into it, as well as how much knowledge you have of the subject matter.
I mean, if you ever come back to the Marvel story, that would be very much welcome, but I'm glad that I didn’t do what I normally do when it comes to an author. When they have a story that's in my top 10, I tend to not read their other stories and just reread that one. I'm so glad I didn’t just continue to reread—well, I am still rereading the Marvel one, because, you know...
I'm glad that I found this story as well! I love the care and thought that you put into it. I really like when an author has fun with their writing. You also have a better understanding of character, character motives, and interactions than most other authors on this site.
So, keep up the good work! And I'd like to offer this: if you ever need someone to spitball ideas with, feel free to PM me. I like to help out where I can.
2/22 c16 MrDisplay
I really like the interaction between Naruto and his mom plus Artemis in this chapter you’re done a great job at building their relationship throughout this story.
I really like the interaction between Naruto and his mom plus Artemis in this chapter you’re done a great job at building their relationship throughout this story.
2/22 c17 MrDisplay
This and the ladt chapter is where I think your writing truly shines, in character interaction. Not to say you’re unable to do good action sequences but they don’t compare to when you put one or more characters together. On that note I’ll go back and review the chapter where olympus was reacting to Narutos fight, I think you didn’t do the best there gor reasons I’ll lay out in the review for that chapter.
This and the ladt chapter is where I think your writing truly shines, in character interaction. Not to say you’re unable to do good action sequences but they don’t compare to when you put one or more characters together. On that note I’ll go back and review the chapter where olympus was reacting to Narutos fight, I think you didn’t do the best there gor reasons I’ll lay out in the review for that chapter.
2/22 c17 random reader 44
Whats the point of being a powerful god if he can't save some people, well I guess we have to wait till next chapter to know what you have planned.
hopefully it doesn't drag on for more that 2 chapter,and we can finally enter the main story.
Whats the point of being a powerful god if he can't save some people, well I guess we have to wait till next chapter to know what you have planned.
hopefully it doesn't drag on for more that 2 chapter,and we can finally enter the main story.
2/21 c17 Saher Mahmoud
This this chapter was emotionally draining but in good way
It’s clearly you are doing a great job with this right now
Can’t wait to know the cause of the sickness and how to solve it and how Naruto will handle and learn from this failure
Hope you’re in a great health and doing well
Keep the great work
This this chapter was emotionally draining but in good way
It’s clearly you are doing a great job with this right now
Can’t wait to know the cause of the sickness and how to solve it and how Naruto will handle and learn from this failure
Hope you’re in a great health and doing well
Keep the great work
2/21 c17 qalleesyawesome
this chapter took a very different turn than what i expected. i thought i was gonna read a bit about the kiss at the end of chapter 16 and maybe a little bit of amaterasu intersection. honestly a little happy chapter yknow. but wow totally didn't expect this! everything happened so suddenly. but i am surprised that it came out of nowhere. and how the plague lasted for 4 years but happened in instant. like shouldn't athena at least realise or be aware that alot of people are getting sick so suddenly and die quickly. that no one was getting better and THEN it became a epidemic which causes panic and mayhem (to explain the explosion and fire). poor naruto and apollo to an extent. for beings thats domain is literally medicine and healing the helplessness of suddenly not being good at your literal power must be devastating and humbling honestly. of course this is some divine incident the fact that godly power only made it worse kinda implied thats it a superior being that has been here for a while to actually know how to do this. i wonder if its from the greek pantheon. maybe naruto should seek out izanami or amaterasu to figure this out. maybe they have seen this before. cause im sure athena and apollo only search and research documents from their pantheon or not.. well that was a great read. im so excited for the next one! so please a little early update this time maybe hmm. thanks again!
this chapter took a very different turn than what i expected. i thought i was gonna read a bit about the kiss at the end of chapter 16 and maybe a little bit of amaterasu intersection. honestly a little happy chapter yknow. but wow totally didn't expect this! everything happened so suddenly. but i am surprised that it came out of nowhere. and how the plague lasted for 4 years but happened in instant. like shouldn't athena at least realise or be aware that alot of people are getting sick so suddenly and die quickly. that no one was getting better and THEN it became a epidemic which causes panic and mayhem (to explain the explosion and fire). poor naruto and apollo to an extent. for beings thats domain is literally medicine and healing the helplessness of suddenly not being good at your literal power must be devastating and humbling honestly. of course this is some divine incident the fact that godly power only made it worse kinda implied thats it a superior being that has been here for a while to actually know how to do this. i wonder if its from the greek pantheon. maybe naruto should seek out izanami or amaterasu to figure this out. maybe they have seen this before. cause im sure athena and apollo only search and research documents from their pantheon or not.. well that was a great read. im so excited for the next one! so please a little early update this time maybe hmm. thanks again!
2/21 c1 Angeloux
Sooo, this doesn’t actually have anything to do with Naruto besides the character name?
Sooo, this doesn’t actually have anything to do with Naruto besides the character name?