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2/20 c16 marioluciosemedo
A plague that strikes that strong and that fast, with the additional issue of godly power making it worse is very confounding. Unless there's a monster involved I can only assume it's a specially designed attack, although the fact that Naruto and other gods are immune to it makes it seem unlikely to be a monster. So the options appear to be that outsiders are the source of this disease, that or an ancient virus that predates the gods themselves.
Will you informe us if this happened anywhere else besides Athens?
2/20 c17 VerudoraCZ
nice chapter
2/20 c17 1DireWolf1412
A heart breaking chapter, once again you wrote it masterfully and i look forward to the next.
2/20 c17 Guest
IT s a shame that we now have to wait another 3 months before you update this again
2/19 c17 1Ninja 909
I am literally addicted to this story and I am thrilled that you posted a new chapter. I love that you make your characters not only realistic, but are also historically and mythically accurate. I learned much about Japanese mythology due to this story and I am grateful. I think you are an amazing writer. I honestly thought that this chapter was going to be much more explosive/dramatic with his meeting Athena, but you completely blindsided my expectations. Hope to see you again soon, really looking forward to many storylines in here, including Zeus, Naruto and Artemis, and potentially the rise of the romans.
2/19 c17 Darth Kyuubi Bugge
Awesome chapter as always
2/19 c17 Guest02957
Awesome chapter! I love how you had Naruto and Artemis take a boat to Athens. I also love how you had Naruto and Artemis try to help the people of Athens while Athena, Apollo and Asclepius try to find a cure to the plague. Will Naruto have Asura's avatar or Kurama's avatar if he uses Kunitsukami in the future? Will Kurama appear in the future? These are just suggestions since this is your story and you can write it however you want.

Anyway, awesome chapter and keep up the great work!
2/19 c17 Djberneman
If it had been over four years since meeting his mother, had he succeeded in finding a way to preserve her?
2/19 c17 valash122
This review is to Lycnt fyi those naruto stories? if you weren't so simple minded and actually PAID attention to the ACTUAL canon Naruto story Naruto could, would and HAD more reason to be dark and evil. You have a WHOLE fucking village hating and ignoring your very existence, a hokage who KNEW your parents refused to tell you them, A hokage who DID fuck all for naruto like who tells the village his status as a Jinchuriki to a bunch of moronic civilians who don't know jack shit about shinobi arts.

Overall those stories are there for people who want to see a version of Naruto if he were to be dark and evil not for people like you(lycnt) who only wants to continue to read a happy go lucky idiot. This story is good cause naruto in this story isn't a complete IDIOT like his canon counterpart.
2/19 c17 SirTaco
this made me cry darn it. great chapter
2/19 c17 Trygen
Man that was a good chapter! I was wondering how uou would continue the story qnd you did not disappoint!

I am excited to see where this story line takes us!

Keep up the good work!

P.S FFN has been acting really awfilly lately. I know there have been issues where readers cannot see new chapters. FFN has said nothing on this. The best way to get access to said new chapters is to refresh it untill it appears.
2/19 c16 lycnt
Always nice to see a good hearted Naruto out there. Can't stand to see anymore of those bloodlusted/dark/gray/etc Naruto's that are way more like Sasuke than anything. And I have little to nothing against Sasuke, but people that overhate him literally make Naruto just like that and they're blind to it.
Off topic as fuck, just ranting sorry.
2/19 c16 dlowe2651
fucking awesome update again soon
2/19 c16 jumpingwilkes
new chapter not showing for me.
2/19 c17 Silent Discord
Great chapter as always! Love to see me some EPIC references wherever they may be. Keep up the good work, I'm eager to see how things play out.
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