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I really liked the way emotions were handled in this chapter. They are well-developed and conveyed in a way that gives each scene a strong impact. The characters' reactions feel natural and full of meaning, making the story even more engaging. The way you develop these emotions is one of the strengths of your writing. I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapters, and I hope you get better soon.
I really liked the way emotions were handled in this chapter. They are well-developed and conveyed in a way that gives each scene a strong impact. The characters' reactions feel natural and full of meaning, making the story even more engaging. The way you develop these emotions is one of the strengths of your writing. I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapters, and I hope you get better soon.
2/19 c17 WarHusky2000
First update of the story in 2025!
This chapter was interesting! I like how you didnt really clarify on the cause or origin of the plague. When I was taking Ancient Greek History, professors explained the Plague in Athens as a result of the overcrowding of the polis every time the Spartans raided the nearby towns and lack of proper sewage and sanitary protocols.
It's also a great chapter to show that Naruto is not perfect and can improve himself to save and nurture mankind. I love your choice of defining what a deity is in their respective pantheons.
Can't wait for the next update! Thanks for sharing!
First update of the story in 2025!
This chapter was interesting! I like how you didnt really clarify on the cause or origin of the plague. When I was taking Ancient Greek History, professors explained the Plague in Athens as a result of the overcrowding of the polis every time the Spartans raided the nearby towns and lack of proper sewage and sanitary protocols.
It's also a great chapter to show that Naruto is not perfect and can improve himself to save and nurture mankind. I love your choice of defining what a deity is in their respective pantheons.
Can't wait for the next update! Thanks for sharing!
2/19 c16 PaladinRoggle
Great chapter! Keep it up man, Im excited to see what comes next! Glad youre doing better.
Great chapter! Keep it up man, Im excited to see what comes next! Glad youre doing better.
2/19 c17 JustAGuyLivingLife
was this the black death? If a god cant cure a disease then it must be another gods doing. (Big G perhaps?)
was this the black death? If a god cant cure a disease then it must be another gods doing. (Big G perhaps?)
2/19 c17 Unnatural Reader
Not what I expected, but a nice surprise. Having something knock Naruto down like this will surely inspire him to grow even more… once he’s of clear mind again.
Did you debate on having Naruto ask his grandma Izanami for help/advice as I’m sure a woman of her experience could offer help?
Not what I expected, but a nice surprise. Having something knock Naruto down like this will surely inspire him to grow even more… once he’s of clear mind again.
Did you debate on having Naruto ask his grandma Izanami for help/advice as I’m sure a woman of her experience could offer help?
2/19 c17 
2Hawk2010
Yikes! That took dark turn. A little confused on why they cound't do anything, but I guess the mystery is interesting.
Naruto will get trhough this. Failure only pushes him to be better.
Great chapter.
2Hawk2010Yikes! That took dark turn. A little confused on why they cound't do anything, but I guess the mystery is interesting.
Naruto will get trhough this. Failure only pushes him to be better.
Great chapter.
2/19 c16 Sophiamay
Hello! I wanted to take a moment to say how much I admire your incredible writing talent. Your story left a lasting impression on me, and I’d love the opportunity to discuss it further.
As a commission-based digital artist, I specialize in collaborating with authors to bring their stories to life through engaging comic art. I believe your work has immense potential in this medium, and I’d be thrilled to explore the possibility of turning your story into a visual masterpiece.
If this idea sparks your interest, you can reach me on Discord (danban1247275) or Twitter ( mariegrey90). I’d love to discuss how we can bring your vision to life!
Hello! I wanted to take a moment to say how much I admire your incredible writing talent. Your story left a lasting impression on me, and I’d love the opportunity to discuss it further.
As a commission-based digital artist, I specialize in collaborating with authors to bring their stories to life through engaging comic art. I believe your work has immense potential in this medium, and I’d be thrilled to explore the possibility of turning your story into a visual masterpiece.
If this idea sparks your interest, you can reach me on Discord (danban1247275) or Twitter ( mariegrey90). I’d love to discuss how we can bring your vision to life!
2/19 c16 Mateo Gomez
Un momento de pausa, fue como sentí el capítulo, no está mal quiero decir. Esperaba que Atenea buscará algo más, creo que la aparicion de caos le puso un gran stop a ciertas tramas que se podrían haber desarrollado ya que como te enfrentas a una entidad que está siendo protegida por el creador de tu mundo.
Francamente no veo a donde va esta historia y eso me gusta pero supongo que este fue más un capitulo de relleno o así lo sentí, maldito Naruto y su relleno.
Un momento de pausa, fue como sentí el capítulo, no está mal quiero decir. Esperaba que Atenea buscará algo más, creo que la aparicion de caos le puso un gran stop a ciertas tramas que se podrían haber desarrollado ya que como te enfrentas a una entidad que está siendo protegida por el creador de tu mundo.
Francamente no veo a donde va esta historia y eso me gusta pero supongo que este fue más un capitulo de relleno o así lo sentí, maldito Naruto y su relleno.