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for Kamen Rider Hero: Heroic Tales: Kamen Rider Marth

5/1/2022 c1 63KKD Silver
Oh my wow! There's so much going on and so much to talk about! I know this was from a 116 page doc, but still!

Overall, this was very cool, and I'm glad you bumped Den-O and OOO in prominence for this story due to them being high favs, as well as bringing in the surprise additions of Zi-O and Revice. That was interesting, but I am confused on some things that were brought up with them. Hopefully you'll tell me later, though there are some other things I want to mention, so~ spoilers for anyone reading.
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...ok, time for those notes.

So Tsukasa sees Foundation X exploited his venturing into the Emblem worlds and takes responsibility for it. Eiji/OOO
saves the two after they gathered some full bottles. Ok. And later, Decade tosses some of the full bottles he got to Build and Cross-Z, justifying why they have them in the first place yet hardly use them otherwise… especially with Build more focused on finding Best Matches than he is on the fight.

XD! Cross-Z sings a Lamb Chop reference before they get Phoenix/Robo, SmaphoWolf, and ToraUFO.

Not to mention Kuuga & Hibiki are noticeably silent.

Micaiah and Sothe pull a Futuri wa PreCure moment and references, alluding also to the sad end of Sothe.

I liked all the pairings you had when the Riders fought together. though, Fourze wasn’t listed in the earlier squad arrival before he joins to help Riderman, Drive, and Skull. So when did he show up?

Also, how does Leangle being there qualify as enough for the Undead to not end the world, let alone Chalice being frozen having that effect?

Ichigou makes a Gargoyles reference upon seeing the Saber Riders, along with making note of Saikou being a Rider that is also a sword.

Suddenly, an alternate OOO arrives to help Eiji, who he believes to be Ankh though he latter doesn’t stay long.

Decade finally smacks some sense into DiEnd about world order, only for Kiva-la to show up, the female Rider even helping Kiva briefly.

And somehow, Jeanne is able to fly up above the dragon and slay it into a glitchy distortion. though of course, to finish it off, everyone leaps in to provide their own Rider kicks and finishers… yet the Dragon was still alive, only to be finally ended by both Ichigou and Marth, the two swapping finishers.

Also, how do the Zi-O riders not know who Ichigou is?

Either way, Decade sends everyone back from whence they came, Ichigou granting Marth the confirmation of being worthy of being a Rider. And somehow, Lucina tripping caused her not to properly return to Robin’s world with him.

Does Tsukasa blame himself for actually (albeit accidentally) causing a disaster/mess? Wow. Also, Onore DiEnd. HA!

Oh, and the reason for the forms used not being in Build proper is because of them not being perfected by Build, before he seemed to think of something about an Ex-Aid full bottle.

So who finds the plans? A mysterious noble? Will we ever find out their identity?

Took a bit, but it’s nice you used the Dragalia Lost cover of the Fire Emblem theme.

In the preview with “Takeshi”, it’s interesting that it hints at the pandemic before it was really a thing.

The action sequences were very well handled and surprisingly detailed, I will say.

I understand the white lie. The results made for a nice surprise and a good story overall.

The preview of Celica and Itsuki is getting me excited to be sure.

Interesting that Takeshi still gave Ike the understanding of being a Rider and that’s who he thought was missing.

Hongo made a Black Panther reference? I missed that.

Either way, I’m so glad that this story turned out as cool as it did and I’m looking forward to more installments in the future. Thanks again, Pika.

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