for Delenda Est -- Rebooted3/10 c1 aetheryna
Heyo! I heard Delenda Est was being rebooted so I immediately came to swing by and check it out. Looking forward to seeing what changes, though I did want to ask: is there a reason the writing style has changed so much? Maybe it’s just getting back into the swing of things but it feels a little more stilted, a little more telling than showing than it was before. Sorry if that comes across as rude, but this first chapter felt like it wasn’t quite as fleshed out, like a rough draft with ideas and descriptions that hasn’t quite been expanded with the proper prose yet. Still going to read anyway because I’ve always liked your writing, just an observation 3
Heyo! I heard Delenda Est was being rebooted so I immediately came to swing by and check it out. Looking forward to seeing what changes, though I did want to ask: is there a reason the writing style has changed so much? Maybe it’s just getting back into the swing of things but it feels a little more stilted, a little more telling than showing than it was before. Sorry if that comes across as rude, but this first chapter felt like it wasn’t quite as fleshed out, like a rough draft with ideas and descriptions that hasn’t quite been expanded with the proper prose yet. Still going to read anyway because I’ve always liked your writing, just an observation 3
3/10 c21 mcwjimbo
Ha. Lily's motherly instincts she has no clue about are pinging "No woman is good enough for my son" ...which is bound to make Lily think she is going crazy
Ha. Lily's motherly instincts she has no clue about are pinging "No woman is good enough for my son" ...which is bound to make Lily think she is going crazy
3/9 c21 Gfeldman
I love this version. I didnt expect to have such a soft spot for the marriage games- and yet each piece and each minor drama is a delight. I need these calm moments, and you do them excellently. Thank you for your work. It really is good.
I love this version. I didnt expect to have such a soft spot for the marriage games- and yet each piece and each minor drama is a delight. I need these calm moments, and you do them excellently. Thank you for your work. It really is good.
3/5 c21 
1Edelius
Ah! The other worldy rivalry with Amelia has surfaced, loved it.
I feel the story isnt advancing to much, I always felt in the original DE that the pace was very slow before the second jump, after that the pace quickened. Im not complaining though, because we get to see a lot of the world, Petunias wedding for example.
Great chapter, please keep it up.
1EdeliusAh! The other worldy rivalry with Amelia has surfaced, loved it.
I feel the story isnt advancing to much, I always felt in the original DE that the pace was very slow before the second jump, after that the pace quickened. Im not complaining though, because we get to see a lot of the world, Petunias wedding for example.
Great chapter, please keep it up.
3/2 c21 avidReader7286
I just binged this story instead of doing my Stats homework this weekend :P I love it so far and am looking forward to future installments with bated breath!
I just binged this story instead of doing my Stats homework this weekend :P I love it so far and am looking forward to future installments with bated breath!
3/2 c20 julian.brady
I actually am always impressed with your writing, I drop anything else to grab a chapter when i see it.
I actually am always impressed with your writing, I drop anything else to grab a chapter when i see it.
3/1 c21 3RohanVos
Welcome back and it was a truly wonderful chapter! I enjoyed your first version and I am enjoying this one even more!
3RohanVosWelcome back and it was a truly wonderful chapter! I enjoyed your first version and I am enjoying this one even more!
3/1 c21 ffntfy456
Loved the chapter. I'm curious what will happen with Edgecombe.
Vernon must really hate magic.
Loved the chapter. I'm curious what will happen with Edgecombe.
Vernon must really hate magic.
3/1 c21 SantaClaws3
Hey, I don’t comment much. But I love the pacing, the writing, and I cannot wait for the next installment. I hope you’re doing better soon.
Hey, I don’t comment much. But I love the pacing, the writing, and I cannot wait for the next installment. I hope you’re doing better soon.