5/7/2022 c1 4ImHellaUgly
That’s kinda odd that he would die after the gods fade considering Alaska is completely outside of their realm of influence and power yet he was still able to go there. And he doesn’t share DNA with the any of the gods he only has his mothers DNA so he doesn’t have any physical ties to the gods. (That’s why they’re able to get away with incest all throughout PJO without it being weird). The concept seems cool from the summary but I can’t really get into it without feeling like he has a real reason to be going to remnant. Also the blessing thing seems kinda cliche and unneeded. If you wanted to make him stronger and more intelligent you can just write him that way instead of saying he instantly got a boost to those things, it kinda takes away from the immersion. I think it would be better to just show instead of tell. (Although that’s a lot easier said than done especially trying to do it with writing.) I think he’d have plenty of reason to have progression without the blessing, he just lost every he loves and even in canon his powers have always reacted with his emotions so that could be an easy explanation for him getting stronger, and for him getting more intelligent you can just write him that way instead of stating he’s smart. Smart people never just say they’re smart, they prove it through the way they act. Also I don’t think Percy would ever call any of the gods My lord or My lady that’s just not really in his character he doesn’t care for titles. Anyways I think you have a good idea but I think it could be executed a lot better.

5/5/2022 c1 Ben
Thanks for writing the story, please keep it up, it was a great read.

5/6/2022 c1 Lolm-21
I hope you continue this… there aren’t many pjo x rwby and this is very promising