for Never Change4/17/2024 c22 Guest
Is Percy dark side coming out for ribs he being influenced by godly essence
Is Percy dark side coming out for ribs he being influenced by godly essence
4/17/2024 c21 Guest
Did the better training and the vault trip mean nothing
Did the better training and the vault trip mean nothing
4/16/2024 c44 Guest
Man, everyone just got rekt.
Man, everyone just got rekt.
4/15/2024 c42 Guest
Wow Percy those were some dark thoughts that's looking like you won't be much better than the current rulers
Wow Percy those were some dark thoughts that's looking like you won't be much better than the current rulers
4/15/2024 c44 Guest
Great chapter
Great chapter
2/14/2024 c43 Guest
Let me say. I love to read this again and again. I think last time I stoped it was at the fall of beacon great to see this again and read it! Can’t wait to see more
Let me say. I love to read this again and again. I think last time I stoped it was at the fall of beacon great to see this again and read it! Can’t wait to see more
1/27/2024 c3 
3XXxxxadisxxxXX
I kinda don't know how to feel with this fic. It has been entirely hit or miss with me so far in almost every element besides the basic English. When it gets going, the fic flows well and keeps me interested. I end up zipping through scenes without realizing it. When it goes off track, it makes me want to bash my head into a wall because of how you portray a character for a joke or present this story's action.
\_(ツ)_/
I could go into the specific things I don't like and vice-versa, but I don't feel like there would be any point to it. It's not going to help your writing with the good stuff or be fixed with the bad stuff. If it's been there for two years it ain't going nowhere. Anway...
~ciao
3XXxxxadisxxxXXI kinda don't know how to feel with this fic. It has been entirely hit or miss with me so far in almost every element besides the basic English. When it gets going, the fic flows well and keeps me interested. I end up zipping through scenes without realizing it. When it goes off track, it makes me want to bash my head into a wall because of how you portray a character for a joke or present this story's action.
\_(ツ)_/
I could go into the specific things I don't like and vice-versa, but I don't feel like there would be any point to it. It's not going to help your writing with the good stuff or be fixed with the bad stuff. If it's been there for two years it ain't going nowhere. Anway...
~ciao
1/16/2024 c43 3DARK WRAITH 2001
I thought Lilith's weapon is a claymore?
Raven should've gone for an easier opponent, like maybe cinder or any of the others.
Lilith will absolutely decimate her, maiden powers or not.
Let's just hope reinforcement arrives before she use her kill 'em all semblance
3DARK WRAITH 2001I thought Lilith's weapon is a claymore?
Raven should've gone for an easier opponent, like maybe cinder or any of the others.
Lilith will absolutely decimate her, maiden powers or not.
Let's just hope reinforcement arrives before she use her kill 'em all semblance
1/7/2024 c43 Guest
Pretty interesting story so far, even if Percy is kinda OP.
Since he and Pyrrha will be a thing, I hope Jaune gets partnered with someone else.
Pretty interesting story so far, even if Percy is kinda OP.
Since he and Pyrrha will be a thing, I hope Jaune gets partnered with someone else.