for Falling Forewarned11/21/2023 c1 Guest
So far so good for a beginning. Now, all we would need is to have a touch of SFPD involvement, which brings in Detective Lieutenant Mike Stone, together with his partner Inspector Steve Keller together with Chief-Of-Detectives Robert Ironside, aided by his associates Detective Sergeant Ed Brown, Mark Sanger, Detective Fran Belding, and former associate Eve Whitfield. Plus, with San Francisco area private investigator Harry Fox, Sr., and even SFPD Inspector Harry Callahan, together with none other than Detective Sergeant Charles Enright, and Commissioner Stewart “Mac” McMillan. Obviously it looks like at this time that Pizzazz was a guest at the St. Gregory Hotel in San Francisco. Yet, we can’t possibly overlook the staff at San Francisco Memorial Hospital that includes good old Trapper John McIntyre.
However, the one very thing we had all to bear in mind is that Stormer may possibly find her true romance with the Pink Panther.
So far so good for a beginning. Now, all we would need is to have a touch of SFPD involvement, which brings in Detective Lieutenant Mike Stone, together with his partner Inspector Steve Keller together with Chief-Of-Detectives Robert Ironside, aided by his associates Detective Sergeant Ed Brown, Mark Sanger, Detective Fran Belding, and former associate Eve Whitfield. Plus, with San Francisco area private investigator Harry Fox, Sr., and even SFPD Inspector Harry Callahan, together with none other than Detective Sergeant Charles Enright, and Commissioner Stewart “Mac” McMillan. Obviously it looks like at this time that Pizzazz was a guest at the St. Gregory Hotel in San Francisco. Yet, we can’t possibly overlook the staff at San Francisco Memorial Hospital that includes good old Trapper John McIntyre.
However, the one very thing we had all to bear in mind is that Stormer may possibly find her true romance with the Pink Panther.
10/8/2022 c1 SinUrge
There were some mechanicals that could use a little tightening up, such as wonky paragraph structure and Random Capitalization. However, all in all, it shows promise. An intriguing origin story that leaves the door wide open for further exploration, which I heartily encourage you to do.
There were some mechanicals that could use a little tightening up, such as wonky paragraph structure and Random Capitalization. However, all in all, it shows promise. An intriguing origin story that leaves the door wide open for further exploration, which I heartily encourage you to do.
8/12/2022 c1 shadowking514
Pretty good chapter I can't wait too see more also do you plan to do any non canon pairings for this story.
Pretty good chapter I can't wait too see more also do you plan to do any non canon pairings for this story.
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