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10/8 c1 SinUrge
There were some mechanicals that could use a little tightening up, such as wonky paragraph structure and Random Capitalization. However, all in all, it shows promise. An intriguing origin story that leaves the door wide open for further exploration, which I heartily encourage you to do.
8/12 c1 shadowking514
Pretty good chapter I can't wait too see more also do you plan to do any non canon pairings for this story.
8/9 c1 54CalvinHobbesGatsby
Please update soon.
5/7 c1 15Sarah8
not bad! want to read more now I to write Jem stories all i ask is when you read mine be gentle because i write Jerrica and Riot love stories. no flaming!

Sarah8

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