
19h c31
14Power of Magic
Well, looks like Snape is gonna be needing a way to try and figure out what Voldemorts secrets are, without letting him know that he's actually spying on him for Dumbledore. It'll be interesting how Fleur and Daphne's parents will react to what Rita said in the Daily Prophet and if they'll help the quartet with dealing with those that don't approve of the harem. Here's hoping that Davis and his thugs will get what they deserve, while Valerie hopefully doesn't get caught with what she'll do to them

Well, looks like Snape is gonna be needing a way to try and figure out what Voldemorts secrets are, without letting him know that he's actually spying on him for Dumbledore. It'll be interesting how Fleur and Daphne's parents will react to what Rita said in the Daily Prophet and if they'll help the quartet with dealing with those that don't approve of the harem. Here's hoping that Davis and his thugs will get what they deserve, while Valerie hopefully doesn't get caught with what she'll do to them
3/15 c31
21Yami Luna Kitsune
FINALLY managed to get this chapter, since it was stuck at chapter 30
pretty great chapter
who is snape calling a 'fool?
wow, skeeter was actually somewhat truthful (even if by luck, given her love to create scandals)
eager for the next chapter

FINALLY managed to get this chapter, since it was stuck at chapter 30
pretty great chapter
who is snape calling a 'fool?
wow, skeeter was actually somewhat truthful (even if by luck, given her love to create scandals)
eager for the next chapter
3/15 c2 Mikeblade
you sure you thought this out sort of hard for bella to be married to harry when she is already married to a guy in prison who is still alive so she's not a widow and no mention what so ever of said marriage ending.
you sure you thought this out sort of hard for bella to be married to harry when she is already married to a guy in prison who is still alive so she's not a widow and no mention what so ever of said marriage ending.
2/19 c1 Fiction Haven
That's a very rushed and shallow setup. Everything falls into place like Karens jumping into conclusions.
That's a very rushed and shallow setup. Everything falls into place like Karens jumping into conclusions.
1/17 c29 Ladis11
I don't remember but... have they not caught Crouch Jr with the map already ? I mean, surely they've used it to sneak around all the time no ?
I don't remember but... have they not caught Crouch Jr with the map already ? I mean, surely they've used it to sneak around all the time no ?
1/14 c25 dave
never understood why it's called balls deep since the balls dont enter
never understood why it's called balls deep since the balls dont enter
1/14 c30
21Yami Luna Kitsune
great chapter
barty Jr is getting suspicious, fuck
sadly, Roger Davies will NEVER learn. he's similar to a troll, like that
dumbledore, ask valerie about the cup
VERY eager for the next chapter

great chapter
barty Jr is getting suspicious, fuck
sadly, Roger Davies will NEVER learn. he's similar to a troll, like that
dumbledore, ask valerie about the cup
VERY eager for the next chapter
1/14 c30
14Power of Magic
Well, looks like Junior believes that Valerie is Bellatrix's daughter and I wonder if he'll grab a piece of her hair or something to try and confirm it and find out who the father is (and I can just imagine his shock, when he finds out that its actually Bellatrix herself) so here's hoping that Harry and the others will find out that Junior is disguised as his own father, before anything like that can happen. It'll be interesting what Dumbledore wanted Snape to do and lets hope that he'll go after the Horcruxes and destroy them, so that they'll be able to defeat Tommy boy once and for all

Well, looks like Junior believes that Valerie is Bellatrix's daughter and I wonder if he'll grab a piece of her hair or something to try and confirm it and find out who the father is (and I can just imagine his shock, when he finds out that its actually Bellatrix herself) so here's hoping that Harry and the others will find out that Junior is disguised as his own father, before anything like that can happen. It'll be interesting what Dumbledore wanted Snape to do and lets hope that he'll go after the Horcruxes and destroy them, so that they'll be able to defeat Tommy boy once and for all
1/14 c30
3Hudy Leak613
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and enjoyed it a lot.

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and enjoyed it a lot.