for The Final Blessing11/22/2022 c10 Some one
I really enjoyed your take on Melina and her story. I hope this fic is not dead and you see it to it’s conclusion. Thank your for the enjoyable read. All the best!
I really enjoyed your take on Melina and her story. I hope this fic is not dead and you see it to it’s conclusion. Thank your for the enjoyable read. All the best!
8/10/2022 c8 Just some guy
So I just had a thought does the tarnished have the ability to see messages for other players worlds and can he see the blood stains. Would it be like he’s looking at thin air with a aura of pity because he just saw another tarnished miss a platform they were jumping to or would he be befuddled at the messages like try finger but hole or the lie ahead messages? Just some thoughts before I forget.
So I just had a thought does the tarnished have the ability to see messages for other players worlds and can he see the blood stains. Would it be like he’s looking at thin air with a aura of pity because he just saw another tarnished miss a platform they were jumping to or would he be befuddled at the messages like try finger but hole or the lie ahead messages? Just some thoughts before I forget.
6/19/2022 c5 Guest
As always, the writing is lovely, this chapter made me emotional. Thank you so much for the good reads! I hope to see this fic to it's conclusion!
As always, the writing is lovely, this chapter made me emotional. Thank you so much for the good reads! I hope to see this fic to it's conclusion!
6/17/2022 c4 Genesis1212
It would seem our Tarnished may have lost the will to become elden lord after the supposed death of Melina. The sacrifice may have left a deep mark on his heart and a bad taste in his mouth
It would seem our Tarnished may have lost the will to become elden lord after the supposed death of Melina. The sacrifice may have left a deep mark on his heart and a bad taste in his mouth
6/16/2022 c5 MrCrOwZ403
okay this is going great, the past u made for melina is actually MIGHT be on point. i hope, still great tho. keep up and make sure to take care of yerself
okay this is going great, the past u made for melina is actually MIGHT be on point. i hope, still great tho. keep up and make sure to take care of yerself
6/12/2022 c4 Shal
My. This is shaping up into my favorite ER fic really fast. I love the quality of the writing in this one, hopefully we'll get more chapters.
My. This is shaping up into my favorite ER fic really fast. I love the quality of the writing in this one, hopefully we'll get more chapters.
6/7/2022 c3 Genesis1212
It's so great to see most of our beloved friends alive and doing well in the new Age of Stars! To see Melina meeting up and seeing what happened to these former companions and friends is heartwarming even though most may not know she was ever there to begin with, through her tarnished though bonds are formed nonetheless.
Appreciate the well made chapter I enjoyed the work!
It's so great to see most of our beloved friends alive and doing well in the new Age of Stars! To see Melina meeting up and seeing what happened to these former companions and friends is heartwarming even though most may not know she was ever there to begin with, through her tarnished though bonds are formed nonetheless.
Appreciate the well made chapter I enjoyed the work!
6/7/2022 c2 Genesis1212
Not to worry you did the dialect well! So there are some comforting things to learn in this chapter that I enjoyed, Blaidd and Iji are alive and traveling with their princess, and to have Ranni bestow her feelings for her consort into Melina is incredibly sweet and loving. It's like their feelings are made in a wholeness with that departing action.
amazing chapter, thank you!
Not to worry you did the dialect well! So there are some comforting things to learn in this chapter that I enjoyed, Blaidd and Iji are alive and traveling with their princess, and to have Ranni bestow her feelings for her consort into Melina is incredibly sweet and loving. It's like their feelings are made in a wholeness with that departing action.
amazing chapter, thank you!
105/15/2022 c2 Guest
This is pretty interesting. Can't wait to see where it goes!
This is pretty interesting. Can't wait to see where it goes!