for On the Other Side5/22/2022 c2 
6QuarantineBlues
Two updates in such s short period of time! You're starting to spoil your readers :) But seriously, this is amazingly written, and I agree with other posters that your Snape is magnificent. The assault was hard to read - that's not a criticism, but a tribute to your writing ability. I know it was put on for show (and Bellatrix was great here, by the way) but I still felt Alice's fear, and, man, that defeated sob - that hit in the gut. And I love that you've given us a strong heroine who is still human enough to be terrified - because that's how real life is.
Oh, and Quinoa the cat. Was there ever a better name for an animal? Thanks for that balm to soothe at the end.
Looking forward to more.
Cheers,
QB
6QuarantineBluesTwo updates in such s short period of time! You're starting to spoil your readers :) But seriously, this is amazingly written, and I agree with other posters that your Snape is magnificent. The assault was hard to read - that's not a criticism, but a tribute to your writing ability. I know it was put on for show (and Bellatrix was great here, by the way) but I still felt Alice's fear, and, man, that defeated sob - that hit in the gut. And I love that you've given us a strong heroine who is still human enough to be terrified - because that's how real life is.
Oh, and Quinoa the cat. Was there ever a better name for an animal? Thanks for that balm to soothe at the end.
Looking forward to more.
Cheers,
QB
5/15/2022 c1 Guest
“Hopefully this story will keep you entertained for the time being”? Girl, I don’t feel entertained I feel obsessed with two stories (and loving it). It’s an absurd how well you write. Normally, I’m not a fan of OC, but still, yours are so natural and interesting that Alice already got me.
“Hopefully this story will keep you entertained for the time being”? Girl, I don’t feel entertained I feel obsessed with two stories (and loving it). It’s an absurd how well you write. Normally, I’m not a fan of OC, but still, yours are so natural and interesting that Alice already got me.
5/14/2022 c1 QuarantineBlues
Delicious beginning! And by "delicious", I mean terrifying, well-written, and full of promise. I'm so glad you're still writing (and so glad you're still working on The Stirring!) Poor Alice. And I shudder to think what that curse does. So much unanswered right now - and all because she needed a thimble-ful of dirt! Alas. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Cheers,
-QB
Delicious beginning! And by "delicious", I mean terrifying, well-written, and full of promise. I'm so glad you're still writing (and so glad you're still working on The Stirring!) Poor Alice. And I shudder to think what that curse does. So much unanswered right now - and all because she needed a thimble-ful of dirt! Alas. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Cheers,
-QB
5/12/2022 c1 vallilakshmanan
Woah I like this female lead.
I feel like this is going to super fun. Also I’m amazed how you keep Snape so on character.
Congratulations on staring a new story.
Can’t wait to read more
Woah I like this female lead.
I feel like this is going to super fun. Also I’m amazed how you keep Snape so on character.
Congratulations on staring a new story.
Can’t wait to read more