for Kiss of Life10/27/2024 c7 Guest
Yes this has been done before where he's kissed. However the Dementor sucks out the Horcrux and thats it. Just recovering from the exposure. Why and how he ends up squibbed in this story I don't understand but its seriously fucked up.
The lack of reactions is fucked too. Why even after all that did Sirius just shut up and let Molly rob Harry and dispense his belongings as though he's dead. Why did he sit there initially and let Harry just eat the little food given and not get him more and boot her?
Why didn't anyone go to the Dursleys and find out where his family heirloom and last item of his father went? It could've just been in the garbage to be grabbed if they got there in time before permanently tossed.
Harry usually bends over and takes it but after all that he's even doing it there? Zero anger?
Oh yay I get to be normal now? Id be murderously angry at the loss of magic. The hell with the rest but losing magic? Yet the entire time he's just whatever.
Sirius waiting till they leave to deny access and forcing Harry to put up with the bs for no reason instead of booting them. Why? To be courteous to people being utterly asses in his home?
Sirius offers to keep them out but lists Dumbledore as well and Harry just says sure? What happened to the hatred that didn't show in the slightest and was barely thought about? Why not speak up and say not dumbledore?
Yes this has been done before where he's kissed. However the Dementor sucks out the Horcrux and thats it. Just recovering from the exposure. Why and how he ends up squibbed in this story I don't understand but its seriously fucked up.
The lack of reactions is fucked too. Why even after all that did Sirius just shut up and let Molly rob Harry and dispense his belongings as though he's dead. Why did he sit there initially and let Harry just eat the little food given and not get him more and boot her?
Why didn't anyone go to the Dursleys and find out where his family heirloom and last item of his father went? It could've just been in the garbage to be grabbed if they got there in time before permanently tossed.
Harry usually bends over and takes it but after all that he's even doing it there? Zero anger?
Oh yay I get to be normal now? Id be murderously angry at the loss of magic. The hell with the rest but losing magic? Yet the entire time he's just whatever.
Sirius waiting till they leave to deny access and forcing Harry to put up with the bs for no reason instead of booting them. Why? To be courteous to people being utterly asses in his home?
Sirius offers to keep them out but lists Dumbledore as well and Harry just says sure? What happened to the hatred that didn't show in the slightest and was barely thought about? Why not speak up and say not dumbledore?
10/12/2024 c13 Guest
This was such a good read! I'm currently sick and groggy, so it took me two days to get through it, but was definitely a great way to pass my awake time. I love the idea of ghosts tutoring in things like dance, etc. I don't think I've seen another story where the horcrux is sucked out by a dementor, so that was interesting. Harry and Voldermort both bring descendants of the Peverell line was cool, and I get that Harry was considered HoH because his mother descended from the oldest, but I wonder if he would have had primacy regardless of birth order since he had two of the brothers as ancestors, and Tom only had one? I understand it wouldn't work that way with living relatives, but being so far removed, might the concentration of the family magics potentially matter more? It's an interesting thought anyway. Thanks for writing and sharing this wonderful read!
This was such a good read! I'm currently sick and groggy, so it took me two days to get through it, but was definitely a great way to pass my awake time. I love the idea of ghosts tutoring in things like dance, etc. I don't think I've seen another story where the horcrux is sucked out by a dementor, so that was interesting. Harry and Voldermort both bring descendants of the Peverell line was cool, and I get that Harry was considered HoH because his mother descended from the oldest, but I wonder if he would have had primacy regardless of birth order since he had two of the brothers as ancestors, and Tom only had one? I understand it wouldn't work that way with living relatives, but being so far removed, might the concentration of the family magics potentially matter more? It's an interesting thought anyway. Thanks for writing and sharing this wonderful read!
9/24/2024 c13 atymer
Absorbing read. Magic seemed to be the one in charge of events, rather than Harry. His response to the latest trauma was more real this time, instead of strong hero Harry we got teen Harry coping with the shocking changes in his life. I especially like that.
It was also more real that the ones who should have supported him were still clinging to their prejudices and making excuses for them. Dumpy as always, blind leading the willfully blind and no true remorse. I am happy Harry won through.
Absorbing read. Magic seemed to be the one in charge of events, rather than Harry. His response to the latest trauma was more real this time, instead of strong hero Harry we got teen Harry coping with the shocking changes in his life. I especially like that.
It was also more real that the ones who should have supported him were still clinging to their prejudices and making excuses for them. Dumpy as always, blind leading the willfully blind and no true remorse. I am happy Harry won through.
9/23/2024 c13 Guest
This was good.
This was good.
9/21/2024 c7 Guest
I thought it was one of the better chapters
I thought it was one of the better chapters
9/20/2024 c13 Guest
Good story. I really liked the concept of the extra-curricular classes that were taught by ghosts. An idea that I’d never seen before
Good story. I really liked the concept of the extra-curricular classes that were taught by ghosts. An idea that I’d never seen before
19/8/2024 c7 noylj
Why is Remus allowed. He ignored Harry, even at school. Harry can't protect from a werewolf, and his head stuck up Bumblemore's arse
Why is Remus allowed. He ignored Harry, even at school. Harry can't protect from a werewolf, and his head stuck up Bumblemore's arse
9/8/2024 c2 noylj
They d hi ig up the on why the dementors only attacked in Harry's netghborhood. Seems like a question any one with more than a room-temperature IQ would ask-even someone useless like Amelia might wonder
They d hi ig up the on why the dementors only attacked in Harry's netghborhood. Seems like a question any one with more than a room-temperature IQ would ask-even someone useless like Amelia might wonder
9/8/2024 c13 Linda
Love the story
Love the story
8/19/2024 c13 MrsFH
I enjoyed your beautifully written story very much. Every interaction between the characters was well thought out and very realistically written. Thanks for sharing your talent.
I enjoyed your beautifully written story very much. Every interaction between the characters was well thought out and very realistically written. Thanks for sharing your talent.
8/17/2024 c13 20000 WPM
I really enjoyed your story. It was unique and well thought out. Left me wanting more from this universe.
I really enjoyed your story. It was unique and well thought out. Left me wanting more from this universe.
8/2/2024 c13 ak
bonne fic!
bonne fic!